Many Men Exclusive by Lil Ace Spitten Fire
 

This Is A Song I Did usin The many men beat.. Holla Bacq At me with the feedback..Be On the lookout for the Younggib Mizzo and Lil Ace Track Its Gonna be str8 Fire.. Holla Back Peace

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Datz a cool lil one. U should use some ad libs! and Yeah yall watch out 4 dat track We doing

Good shit...
Flow was choppy..Work on that...
Lyrics were aight...

Overall...average drop....

yeah it alrite, lyrics alrite, flows q.good
voice maybe a tiny bit to loud for tha beat, either that or jus turn the beat up
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thanks for the feedback i gladly appreciate it:::1:::

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listen 2 thier Many Men freestyle..... they raped u. you got stupid lyrics and need alota help

Oh here we go the hatin beginz listen up first that song was one of my written shyt and it wasnt my best and you talkin bout freestylin nig**a ill show you what the fuc freestylin is ive been doin this since 96 and i freestyle 95 % of my songs so youngin ride yo azz outta hea cuz im not the type of m.c. you fuc wit...

Your Lyrics Are Pretty Basic.. nothing really i like it..

im not really feeling your flow .. falls off a lot..

you didnt really ride the beat nice ..

delivery was pretty bad..

you need some work.

ummmmmmm why is it that when someone comes in saying that what you did wasnt good....its "hate"

maybe everyone needs to chill with the "hate" assumptions and start dealing with their own denial.....

did you really think this was good? honestlly?....

"i been back for the last 6 years, my records dont stop...balh blah..."

"i murder rapers and make them look worse than the game with the cavaliers..."

and LMFAO @ you in the background "yeah..yeah...yeha...yeah..." thanks puffy....

seriosully..u need some help man...

.pz.

lol

Yo i dont wanna rain on your parade but like ure flow was decent but what really made my ears bleed is ure verse man..it was some of the simplest shit ive heard man like i aint hatin or nothin but yo i used to write stuff like that when i went to gradeschool
but whatever man u got a good base just try writin more complex verses...u on the right track

Yo Atilla thanks at least you were real and now i know what i have to do to improve thanks .... Yo Mizzo you see thiz shyt funny writing lol up in this after a nigga did u a favor on yo song shyt yaw dukes spitted fuckin 40 seconds between you and gib shyt i had to spit for a min and like 30 seconds to make that song go somewhere.. But its all gravy!! w/e yo Im out