1st audio freestyle Dip set anthem instr.
 

my 1st audio juss sumthing i put 2gether real fast
gimme sum feed back

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/e...apottsmusic.htm
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Hey Biatch You best change yo fuc*in icon and the song sucks shyt i could spit better on any r o c beat anytime betta then you!!! peace

Wow .. This Was ..
Weak ..

Flow Was way Off..


Content Was Weak ..

Delivery Was Wack ..

Quality Was Wack ..

You Need Work.

LoL @ you tryin to sound like jay -z ....

do you kids realize that tere is a fuckin beat there for a reason..........u should just uploaded teh acapella without the beat....

damn

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it needs work. like staying beat and all that the quality didn't sound all that clear either

yo man u gotta always practice 24-7 man if u wanna get better....
Ure flowin like a dried up river, u got no wordplay , no multis or nothin.... and u goota spit with more presence and energy on the mic...cuz if u dont sound like u init, the listener for sure wont be in it........ but yo take it as a critique not as a diss... everyone gotta start somewhere