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Grandfather Clock
[Twas A Topical Battle Vs Mad Mad]
Tik Tik .. . . . Everything Has A Story To Tell, But Not The Time To Express It.. . . . But Grandfather Has Time On Hands, To Teach Us A Lesson.. . . . Grandfather Was A Quiet One, Kept Everything Locked Inside.. . . . But Grandfather Had The Power, To Make Events Arise .. . . . Never Mourning When Death Arose, Never Suprised When Times Changed.. . . . Tik, Tik, Tik The Only Words Spoken, When Around Him Conversation Aranged.. . . . Time Is Money, Grandfather Was Filthy Rich .. . . . Spent The Fortune On Life, Not Knowing That He Controled It.. . . . When Time's Were Rough, He Always Held The Upper-hand.. . . .Seconds, Hours, Minutes Passed, But No One Would Understand.. . . .Grandfather wasn't Worthless, The Lesson He Tought Was This.. . . . There's A Time For Everything, But He's The Only One That Knew It.. Theres' One More Lesson He Taught, Learned This After Long.. Even After I Died, You Died, Time Still Goes On.. |
Now this was perty nice jay...Very Well written, enjoyed, it, not too long, just good amount, got everything across nicely, what was the topic..Grandfather Clock?? Nice piece...
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Uppin for Jae. . . you know my opinion on this. Dope as fuck.
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Yup .. UP
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this was nice .... i think the finish was the best part... good flow... was hopin for it to be longer .. enjoyed the read .. stay up n droppin `1
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i'll give a 7 fo effort
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^ok, rookie.
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