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Jae Cyph 06-13-03 03:36 AM

Grandfather Clock
 
[Twas A Topical Battle Vs Mad Mad]

Tik Tik ..

. . . Everything Has A Story To Tell,
But Not The Time To Express It..
. . . But Grandfather Has Time On Hands,
To Teach Us A Lesson..
. . . Grandfather Was A Quiet One,
Kept Everything Locked Inside..
. . . But Grandfather Had The Power,
To Make Events Arise ..
. . . Never Mourning When Death Arose,
Never Suprised When Times Changed..
. . . Tik, Tik, Tik The Only Words Spoken,
When Around Him Conversation Aranged..
. . . Time Is Money,
Grandfather Was Filthy Rich ..
. . . Spent The Fortune On Life,
Not Knowing That He Controled It..
. . . When Time's Were Rough,
He Always Held The Upper-hand..
. . .Seconds, Hours, Minutes Passed,
But No One Would Understand..
. . .Grandfather wasn't Worthless,
The Lesson He Tought Was This..
. . . There's A Time For Everything,
But He's The Only One That Knew It..

Theres' One More Lesson He Taught,
Learned This After Long..
Even After I Died, You Died,
Time Still Goes On..

Orikle 06-13-03 04:34 AM

Now this was perty nice jay...Very Well written, enjoyed, it, not too long, just good amount, got everything across nicely, what was the topic..Grandfather Clock?? Nice piece...

...........Pz............

AxL is God 06-13-03 10:39 PM

Uppin for Jae. . . you know my opinion on this. Dope as fuck.

Peril Eyes 06-14-03 02:18 AM

Yup .. UP

Affiliate 06-14-03 03:25 AM

this was nice .... i think the finish was the best part... good flow... was hopin for it to be longer .. enjoyed the read .. stay up n droppin `1

J-Wizzle 06-14-03 04:58 PM

i'll give a 7 fo effort

Jae Cyph 06-14-03 08:23 PM

^ok, rookie.


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