help plz
 

when i try and rhyme i just fuck my words up and everythin goes 2 bollocks and everythin just soundz wack any1 got any pointers.

if ya want an example look 4 my battle against solar elipse whuch never had a result cos i didnt really produce a verse.:mad:

try to put ur words in structure....
instead of...
jhugfjhgjhwgjfgwjjrefhwgwlfjgwjgfjwjefshgfgsdjfgjs gfjgfjgfjgfgjegfergjferjgrjfegrfygjjfgjsgfjgfruewg fjegfiuyuygfriuryurfuyfguyfgtuktrudhtfrdutrugreufe tuyyydsydygdyguudehsetfrtsfgteewtwefetyfftdtyeehgg dghsdfhgfdfgshgfwfhfqdwffuck ur moms in the buttt blah

try like dis.....
blah blah blah blah cat//
blah blah blah blah blah mat//
blah blah blah blah blah blah blah rat//
blah blah blah blah bat//
blah blah blah blah blah sat//

its easier to read and you'll see improvement in rhyme scheme.

Ok captain points-out-the-obvious *cough* I mean Born2flow.
Could I suggest a rhyming dictionary to u Ak.
The best advice I have for u is to
*Increase your vocab
*Read some raps on the FL or EFL
*Put some time into thinking what makes an effective punch
*Be creative. A good idea is to think of something embarrassing that happens to a lot of people, blow it way out of proportion, and just start makin stuff up. A good example would be A father talking to his son about something embarrassing... shit like that.
*Learn the lingo.
*Start out battlin' newbies, till u get more experience and voting ability.
*Read and follow the rules EXACTLY.
*Spit second (put that in ur bitch slapped thread)

That's about it. Good luck!

*PUT SOME JOKES INTO IT TO MAKE IT ENJOYABLE TO READ!!!!

Stress your brain hard as u can, and the jokes will come. Think of an old joke or saying and make it a put down. i.e., I tryed to read ya mind, but the page was blank. Thats one i used.
Another good one Ive heard was "when ya tried to speak ya mind, it left u speechless"

lol that was funny the tryed to speak ur mind shit
laughed me for a couple of seconds