I Know Why....
 

If I recently talked to you, you understand this.

I know why there's druggies, I know why there's suicide
All the pain, the torment, the trouble I feel inside
If you were recently evicted, what would you do
Wouldn't you wanna go where you were accepted, where people wanted you
Where you weren't insulted criticized demoralized
Where people thought you were cool, not saying things that made you hurt inside
I didn't find what I was looking for over there
Grandpa on death bed received no pity anywhere
Jill....I love you, you are a great outlet for my emotions
To cry on your shoulder through all this commotion
Pain, fear, I wish it would all go away, I wish it would die
The pain, it's dull, when I rest my head on your shoulder and cry
I never said I was perfect. What would make you think that?
Suicide playing in my mind, wish I knew where my gun was at
Drugs to dull the pain, it's still on the top of my mind
The alcohol in my system, only makes me hurt more inside
But if you were in my shoes what would your choice be
Well just like the last line in my song, I know how to kick a box out from under me
I never asked for the shit that I got, I don't feel that I even deserved it
Try to tell these people that, but their ears, they will not hear it.

A very deep man...
alot of emotionz released here
keep ya head up man..pz and much luv

It's deep because, I wrote it before I went over to Jill's, because I didn't want to be crying when I first saw her face.....I did anyway.

Ill drop fam.....this piece was full of raw emotion....You are one of the first peeps that has made me feel what you were feelin thru words....Keep it up...And sorry to hear it if there was real pain behind this piece....holla

pz, Reezun

Uppin

sooo very tru...very nice madman...very very nice

Upping one more time.

The personal emotions were most definetly apparent. Very little 'frills', just you and your 'situation'. Written in a way which was scattered with vivid imagery and strong references. The way you brought other situations into it to show how strong and deep the relationship is.

A personal piece which was depicted in a fairly pure manner. So no critique.

..resp...

RAW,STRUCTURED,WELL PLACED,this was ill,keep droppin.