Romeo and Juliet
 

In fair verona where we lay our scene
where civil blood makes cvil hands unclean
two star crossed lovers..take their life

it happened like this, a party too people did meet
a capulet, a montague both fell head over feet
in love with each other and although it was forbidden
couldnt help but keep their burning love well hidden
so it came that they married and then they grew apart
but their love grew much stronger in te depths of their hearts
couldnt live without each other so on one fine day
juilet decided ending her life was the only way
to save her from her heartache, battled between heart and brain
tossled with the idea that she would never see romeo again
so a poison she did take to numb her hearts ache
and when romeo shakes her...she will once again awake
but the word spread like chinease whispers, and romeo percived wrong
went towards her tomb crying.to take one last look and say so long
to his one true lover, but a secret weapon he did keep
another poision in his pocket to lull him to eternal sleep
rather than shaking her he kissed her then prised open the bottles lid
fell falt on his back beside his lover.in their forever crib
but then a breathe did come from juilets two blue lips
and then her heart died again as she figured out what romeo did
feverishly she found beside his limp body another weapon
stabbed herself and died again..but both be reuinited up in heaven

okay i was bored..bu cmon.romeo and juliet....therye like the best love story everr

um will people stop just reading this and post please.....i mean how can i get better at something if dont kno whats up *sniff sniff*

Nice Piece

This piece was aight...it looked like you rushed it just to get it on the board...but props..it was ok...not your best work but I'm not hatin cause we all know you can do alot better.

Bmack said all that was needed to say... it was a good piece, and it shows you had nothin better to do...
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