fgee (3-0) vs. Phrantik (3-1)
 

Check In's are due MONDAY
Verses are due by TUESDAY
Voting end's THURSDAY

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Topic...
cover up

cover up......hmmmm.....should be interesting
checking into this match up.....hopefully some dope shit

it would be dope, but your wack.
thanks for another easy win.
hmm.. cover up? i already got
an idea.

fuck u faggot^^^^^
what the fucks your problem?....internet beef ..........lmao
anyway i'll beat u 2moro

i never brought i-net beed.
i stated i-net facts.
quit while your ahead, i was
the dopest topical champion on rb
for a reason. prepare to lose.

post away kid.
i got a verse done.
it will beat you.
cause i am dope.
and you are not, when you
beat sand, somethin was
wrong.. you wont be lucky again.

lmao
ur a fukin herb....jus cos the belt didnt go your way....bet u been workin on a verse for the whole week.....
i'm postin soon

late autumn.....hunting trip.......

deep in a national park......

leaving the cabin the three of us set out for bears
each hopin they could shoot a fur rug thru cross hairs
idle banter floated in the pine filled air....as we set for higher ground
cracking branches under foot....and birds emitting sound
a tranquil morning rapidly passing with every bound....but still a long way to the hunting prime spot
on a path with an unplanned plot....the perfect ending with one laser guided shot
continuing on needle covered floors i almost forgot....i hadn't packed a sleeping bag!
fuck.....now i had to return to base......what a drag
we agreed to meet up again at the 'Stag'.....the place we always camp at
parting ways to an unforeseen future that...would result in elemental combat
amongst trees i glanced up at sky and it spat!....i had been lulled by the morning sunshine now the weather had turned
clouds formed fronts above as my stomach churned....a strange sense possesed my body....a sign of a lesson to be learned
i picked up my pace the weather was a major concern....step by step my clothes became wetter until i wore water
the heavens lowered their stance tryin to confuse this walker....cold unrelenting powers capable of slaughter
in my stupidity i had left warm clothes as well....now shivers flowed all over my soul
taking a firm grip on nerves turning heat to cold....sucking the energy from me i felt ready to fold
rain turned from sleet the sleet into snow....visibility so bad trees smacked into me without warning
thoughts turned to my friends left behind this morning....i just hoped they were safe and not fighting a storm stalking
stumbling into the flurry of flakes my eyes struggled with sight
looking at my arm it was blue against white.....daylight left my head and turned to night
i had to sit down or find shelter to rescue me from this plight....but futility overcame my will
the drop in temperature was like a drill....hitting my torso to the core exposed parts numb from the chill
nauseated from the exposure my mind flipped until....i slumped on the white carpet and passed out
when i came to my eyes were crusted to the lids now....hands were useless attachments frozen throughout
faint memories of boyhood....dam why didnt i got to scouts....a faint smile grimaced across my face
i was helpless shackled by the blizzards embrace.....my back pack stuck to sweat unmovable from its place
squirming i tried to move darting looks for the cabins grace....but blank sheets of snow blocked out my vision
i felt deaths wrath start to make its incision....how the tables had turned....i was now my own prison
consciousness faded back and forth with deaths permission....teasing me with its power
an hour became minutes and minutes bacame seconds as it commenced to devour
now i wish i had covered up idiocy my demise....i just wish life could hear my silent cries.......

It’s the Easy, Breezy, Beautiful, Cover Girl

Hidden tears with paint
Eyes drip with fear
Her skins color is faint
But you cant tell from near
Shes ahead of the game
Hides her real beauty
Then she sleeps in shame
And wants the world to see
Every day is the same
A new identity is born
She walks the walk of fame
But her talk is torn
Screams and cries
She can’t stand to be her
Living life as lies
Her heart wants to free her
The brain and the soul
Both cant agree
She wants to fall in a hole
And never be free
Allow her to change
Strip the costume all down
She cant stand to be strange
She cant hide her frown
Unhealthy living cant hide
She exposes the her real look
Shes learning to survive
Judged the title of the book
But now I can see
The eyes of this pup
Her soul has been set free
No need to cover up

dam sleepers
uppin this shit.............................................. ...
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ok , i liked fgee's verse, but it was too crazy of a reading set up, didnt get all the rhyme scheme, multies, or any of that shit
where as phrantik had a nice verse with an... abab set up...
that was easy to see,, verse quality goes to phrantik...
complexity goes to fgee... <--- he had the complexity, but complexity is nothing without quality

Vote: Phrantik

1-0... for me.
i hate to say i told you so
but
i told you so.

uppin. for some more votes.......

Phrantix, Yours Was Very Easy To Read, Simple, And Understandable...

fgee Had Multis, And Maybe A More Urgency To His Topic...I Say Fgee Took It Though, His Multis WERE Alot More Complicated, And In the Same Way Better, Than Phrantix...Phranix I Know What You Were Trying To Do But It Came Out TOO Simple

Vote=fgee

Phrantiks Verse Wuz Simple.....Easy To Read For Children...Although It Had A Good Story To IT.....Fgee's On The Other Hand I Followed.....He Used Nice Wordplay Also.......I Feel As Though He Grasped The Concept Better Than Tik....And For Future References This Isn't A Hate Vote So I'm Not Hearin That....Vote=Fgee

(but sometimes u should think before u speak)

ha ha
eat your fukin words Tik
finally someone has seen the light.........
keep em coming

it's 1-1