Mad Man (3-1) vs. LyricAli (3-1)
 

Check In's are due MONDAY
Verses are due by TUESDAY
Voting end's THURSDAY

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Topic...
Behind enemy lines

Oh shit Ali, this is gonna be tight.
You think you got what it takes?


IN!

I should hope so. . Good Luck, keep RB reputable.

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Yo Ali, Football practice just killed me.
As bad as this sounds, I'm going to
give myself an extension until tomarrow
morning.
pz.

Am I a dumbass or what, verses aren't due til tomarrow anyway

Is it still due tonight? I have four verses due tonight, if that is the case. .

Let me know so I can get started

...::ºTheoryº::...
Some kids in this world, tryin' to imitate what they hear
Listenin' to 50 talk about dealin' crack, and killin' thugs when they near
Kids so easily influenced by all that they hear and all that they see
Parents need to pay more attention to the sticker that says "Parental Advisory"
Cause once they head down that lonely road, their is no turning them away
Growin' up to be like the thugs they see, it'll get them killed some day.

...::ºThe Beginningº::...
The shit he did in the beginning was petty, smoked some dope, thought he was cool
Shit started turning around very quickly, before you know it he dropped outta school
Couldn't afford all the dope he needed, started selling some, just to make ends meet
Dope quickly turned into crack, before he knew it, he was in to deep
Made some friends in the business, hooked him up with merchandise and locations
Built up a mini empire, he called it "The Jerry Lowery Invasion"
Shit was going good the kid was flying high and free
Made his first million dealin' crack, before he turned 20.
But he never knew when to quit he thought that he was unstoppable
Crew got tired of him, were gonna get rid of him once and for all

...::ºThe Last Dealº::...
They rolled up into another Crews territory, Jay didn't know, he was kept outta the loop
Told Jay a major client would be here, all he had to do was go up and take the loot
But the client was there to take the other crews crack not his
Jay got the picture when he looked back at the car, and saw it was not his
His crew had left quickly and silently, they had made for sudden flight
Guys pulled out Uzi's, Jay couldn't put up a decent fight.
He layed on the ground, he knew what would happen, he would be beaten until he would die
Because he was a prisoner of a metaphorical war, he was trapped behind enemy lines

...::ºMoralº::...
Jay's parents truly moarned when their son turned up dead after he was missing for a week
Parents questioned every decision they had made. could find no comfort in sleep
But you parents out there, your kids don't have to go through what happened to Jay
Be their for them talk to them, help them find the absolute right way.
Because if they can't confide in you they will turn and learn from the street
And Jay's story will be of no purpose, except for people of the RBTL to read.



Edited to unbold a part

Christ! A damn chronicle. . I'll try to get something out, good piece. . Adios

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I'm gonna give you until 4 pm PST to post aight.
I think that that is more then generous.

just saw. . Fell asleep last night, my mistake. I'll throw something together now, but you win either way

Sorry Ali, I had to close this, I can only give you so much time,
But you will not be banned from the RBTL :D