Dagger
 

Mission logistics escaped their cerebrum prison, civilian killing program’s military forbade
I lived long enough to execute survivalist tactics, abandonment issues with the basics
Irony details the plastic handle, five-limb weapon extension, and reinforced Juxtaposition blade
Two-face, a portrait Charlie has already painted, a clean slate needs my blood to stain it
I keep the sun under my helmet and the moon on a belt clip, and Love’s picture in a distant promise
SafeReturns forgot Hope. Stealth fighting ComeBacks won’t even blip a symbol detect
Death Guerrilla hand-gripped dagger, Fear grips blood-thirsty projectiles, sweet Kamikaze conscience
My pistol breathes Death. I throw stones and drop bombs just to compare ripple effects
A sleeping cadaver in a bag, military unit mass grave slumbers found underground pincushions
Remove some and lose one, let’s use God’s life-taking techniques with an upward thrust
Fear equilibrium nights, dagger-owner’s throat betrayal slice; Dream mud puddle deaths that Sin stood in
NeverLeave friends, and NeverEnd loves; nothing to lose Poker: no hand and a poor bluff
Tree canopy jungle entrapment, Satan’s ritualistic patrons surrounding, unseen shadows play tricks
Irony villager innocence statement, last resort action: unsheathe fear, let my wrist feel the blade’s kiss

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^^:D :D....very nice muh,very nice indeed,i keep the sun under my helmet,moon on a belt clip,,,ohhh....nice little spit...multi filled...liked five limb weapon extension,that was cool....sones and bombs to compare ripple effects,ahhaha excellent line,very nice eh....liked it,alot.good vocab and rhyme scheme was everywhere,but i liked it alot anyway,very nice...


lol liked the audios too. :P... ya i found them doing just random page searches lol,go soundclick...

^^^goood drop man,good to see someone that takrs decent care with the shit...and not just rushed peices everyday type thing,good job

Jesus.....I hate those audios........
I'm taking them off as soon as I have something to replace them with.......

but thanks for the response......

lmao...un unnn unnnknownnn unknow sensation...haha shits ill man....when y ou gettin new one??

i liked this a lot, u know your one of the best textcees here so im not gonna give u all that shit but i have 1 critiscm, sumtimes it read 2 much like a poem, for example u meant 2 rhymes such as promise and conciouse which wouldnt really work and would look out of place if u ever did this audioly but its till dope 2 fuck. also u are the first 2 be rated under the new Eborted RAting System!

Eborteds Verdict- A-

^^Well, actually, it is a poem....... a Shakespearean Sonnet to be exact.......

I just decided to put it under here because I'm actually trying to get someone to make a beat for it and I'll see how I can spit to it

This was dope
i liked this alot

Thanks.......

and Atetrack, that chorus was experimental.....testing my limits

And I found they didn't expand to that area

Upping......

nice drop keep dat shit up dawg

nice wordplay, vocab da whole 100 yards

wow you could actually rap when your not talking shit about 50 cent......

i wont bother with tips cause you goy your own style and it actually nice

can i get a big G G G G G-unit

Fo Sho man, .......That shit was raw!
keep doin your thing!
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