freestyle
 

dont act like u dont know me cos u look at me like u own me, im the new girl so dont throw me cos im female, and not a homie, im from britain yea ya know me, im the one that slit ur mothas throat on holiday, so dont dis the teen tht can slice u quick its a reject world and i live it bitch.

should i also mention im white too bloodlust bitch and im trapped in ya world. p.s......im comming too.

so u can pretend to hate me i have no crew no back up either just my words and my fingers. hoe

Re: freestyle
 

Make more rhymes and punch harder. I saw harder bitches.but you'll get there...



Peace, out

i can write harder but i was in like 10 msn convos as i wrote tht so i wasnt really concentrating. but dun worry next time it will be alot betta ill just switch off everything on my comp and just focus.

Thugzdocry is a bitch so listen 2 me

i can tell yoa newbie but thats ok, think better subject matter even if its jus a freestyle, think wordplay, think harder punches, Think a lot better vocab especially for a text piece
keep writing tho but

Eborted Verdict- U

return the favour and peep http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=57908

^^^^^^^^What he said

Yo the bitch here
i did'nt say it sucked......i just that she could put more rhyme in it dawg

Peace

it needs more

add sum shit to it

it'll be tight

no hate