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Hell On Earth
Chorus:Mobb Deep
Hell On earth who's next and gonna be first? The Projects is frontlines and the enemy is one-time Verse 1: Im tryin to get a-hold of myself, because the selfishness prevents me from finding my wealth/ The Apocalypse is now and you gotta get ready for it, by the time you realize you had a life full of sins/ Shit taken out, the devil's lasso is tightenin up on me, and i can't think staright, due to metaphorical shit, my minds gone crazy/ So tell me whos next and whos gonna be first, cuz im ready to take all out, to relieve this curse/ Seeming that iv'e gone whild, and no long a golden child, took out to black crimes portrayed in A Green Mile/ And all up in the ghetto, been living here for a while, even in a McDonalds you don't seem to catch a smile/ Chorus:Mobb Deep Hell On earth who's next and gonna be first? The Projects is frontlines and the enemy is one-time Verse 2: if the projects is frontline, then the war has already begun, because violence places its aura, darkening all the fun/ And it seems that to dissect the whole blue-print, you'll see all so well, you designed a blueprint, designed to bring hell/ Section 8 motherfuckers livin out of the projects, seemin the same as frightnening, as jail niggas comin out the closet/ The projects portrays the physical presence of the battlefield, and show the life sentence that we all were forced to wield/ Chorus:Mobb Deep Hell On earth who's next and gonna be first? The Projects is frontlines and the enemy is one-time The enemy has already stuck us with poor housing, people talk on the streets, healths arousing/ If ya talk so negative about it, why don't you help the out?, because all the bullshit seems to portray itself once you open ya mouth/ The battlefield cannot be helped in any other cause, because outside the country we are great, but if you live here,you'll see our flaws/ We are United yet we had the great Coast-Coast war, we know that we lost two soldiers, so if we fight how can we bless they souls/ We are United yet we had the great Coast-Coast war, Biggie and Pac died, and who knows there mightv'e been more/ Chorus:Mobb Deep Hell On earth who's next and gonna be first? The Projects is frontlines and the enemy is one-time |
are the verses not a bit too SHORT?, no..
regardless this is a tight piece, the flow was blazin all the way through, the wordplay and vocab were there as well... overall:8.5/10 :D |
yea i liked dat drop
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keep dat shit up dawg
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^^WTF^^
he wants some consrtuctive critisim that'll help him, everytime you reply to a piece you always say - "thats tight, keep it up!" |
dats tight
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nice vocab
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nice format tooo
keep dat shit up |
uppin this shit...
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Pretty tight i did like this,yep i liked it.
Yo recheck tha warlords anthem part 3 dawg,lol. Peace |
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