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WHITE RABBIT 06-16-03 06:21 PM

WHITE RABBIT vs. ~k-SkAnDaLuZ (HOW MANY TIMES WE GOTTA UP THIS FOR U TO VOTE!!!)
 
1. Any beat
2. MAX 3:30
3. MIN 2:00
4. First to 5 votes wins
6. No crew votes
7. Due whenever

*VOTE!

~k-SkAnDaLuZ 06-16-03 08:01 PM

aight. word. i'll get mine up by the end of this week. get ready. http://www.members.aol.com/killahk22/cbrown.gif

~k-SkAnDaLuZ 06-17-03 03:28 PM

here's the track. it's called "Worthy of a Warrior." lyrics are below along with explanations:

Lo-Fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=404306&q=Lo

Hi-Fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=404306&q=Hi

Lyrics:
When I'm up in the game, I demand respect
Tearin your rhymin dialect, mouth and neck disconnect //
The magnitude of these rhymes keep emcees in check
You need rhyme-agra, your battle skills ain't erect //
Let alone, not up to mine yet
See the venom I inject in brains, I give them bad effects //
I pounce on damp emcees, my rhymes are wet
Your rhymes shouldn't have been the thing you'd neglect //
Make you piss in trousers when I rhyme for hours
Rip you in half with only a fourth of power //
My rhymes scower, higher than a level of sour
My rhymes got more fog than girls takin hot showers //
Battle you on the site of fallen twin towers
Diss America and pour down poisonness powder //
It ain't flour, see all the rabbits I devour
You ain't got the head to match this brainpower //
See, you ain't got the skills that matches mine
Hop around like a rabbit, Lynn to Anaheim //
I got grime, I can blaze a million times
With a billion lines, my rhymes take a trillion lives //

(Sample)

I'm prepared with cold stares, you ain't got a prayer
Hide many lyrical snares when you're in my lair //
Yo I'm more scandalous than Bill Clinton affairs
Call me fluid, I can moonwalk down the stairs //
My rhymes are like the Lord, they're everywhere
I'll sharpen things too, stab you with an arm of a chair //
I am here, wavin more claws than bears
And killin rabbits when they misanswer my questionaires //
Are you ill? Can you impair?
Can you still ensnare when you're rhymin elsewhere? //
I can, from Canibus-Central to RB *
When I slice and dice, I can cole slaw meat //
When we meet, I can hear your fast heartbeat
I'll beat your heart in the game, I caw, you tweet-tweet //
Come to me and you'll see the secrets I secrete
I'll buy your own beat, stuff you with your receipt //
Grab you by the bunny tail, smashed to concrete
I might be a newbie, but I'm now the elite //

(Sample)

Bringin you from dusk straight into the dark
My punches come in threes, more than the arc //
Numero uno, they blow you up with a spark
With movable jaws kinda like a great white shark //
Number 2, they use C02 to break your C4 down to C2
With one breakthrough //
Number three, they use accessories to gain accuracy
To blaze you abundantly acidently //
Kickin your achilles, with my heel
There's not one emcee that emanates my zeal //
I conceal the seal, that decides your fate
Turnin black bears into white rabbits, you shake //
What's the true meaning of rhyme opaque, you quake
I don't let your electricity in, you bake //
And shake, I lift all the leaves without a rake
Pour it all your grave, you were flattened like pancakes //
Rip to pieces, piece of master thesis
If you had clorox three, you still couldn't clean this //
With a 10 mile wide hole, you still couldn't peep this
It's the deepness, of a 15 year old *
If you used MS Word, you still couldn't bold //
Your still controlled, blazin your ears like that
Crushin cats and shootin without wieldin a gat, it's critical black //

Explanations (*) :

I also battle on Canibus-Central. RB means RapBattles of course!

I'm 15 years old.

WHITE RABBIT 06-17-03 05:44 PM

aight coo.. i'll drop mines before tha week ends

*edit: tha latest i'll drop by is sunday

http://dragond.hypermart.net/white%20rabbit.jpg

JD 06-18-03 02:08 AM

lol White Rabbit your name = almost the same as Eminem the movie , his name was rabbit!!!
But 1 think , I hope you don't fuck your girlfriend like a rabbit!!!

~k-SkAnDaLuZ 06-24-03 12:30 AM

yo whats goin on rabbit? i thought we were gonna battle. u said you'd have it up by sunday at the latest. i guess i wasted my time. ~oNe

WHITE RABBIT 06-24-03 02:43 AM

my bad yo.. had some shit goin on lately and didn't get a chance to record

i'mma drop by tonight if its coo

WHITE RABBIT 06-24-03 03:55 AM

aight i had to rush this shit but w/e.. better then no-showin

http://www.soundclick.com/mcwhiterabbit

verse 1:
yo it's ya boy WHITE RABBIT, tha new kid-on-RB
battlin Skandaluz.. but this bitch-can't-harm-me/
i peeped some ya audios, u gotta work-on-ya-shit
cuz i could free this verse, and still be hurtin-this-bitch/
u need to go back to text, cuz ya bars-are-wack
and u couldn't spit wid energy even if i sparkd-ya-raps/
wid my hard-attacks i'mma be rippin'-it-strong
i can't tell if u battlin me or just singin-a-song/
if u lookin for trouble, here u go, u found-it
thank god u took that ugly picture off your soundclick/
its like i'm cookin a circus cuz i'mma bake-this-clown
u ain't go no delivery so i'mma 'take-you-out'/
just quit now son, u really can't beat-my-frees
i should play ya songs at night cuz it really puts me-to-sleep!/
besta stand back, cuz u know my flows-hottest
u couldn't deliver hot text if u worked in a post-office/

verse 2:
i'll wreck-this-bitch, u can't text-for-shit
crack ya neck-and-split, i know u stressin,-kid/
u can't stand up to me, cuz i'mma break-ya-legs
ya shit is mad tired, u otta take-a-break/
i break-this-gay, cuz u can't battle,-kid
this fag be soundin like a fucked up version of fabolous/
i'm smokin up this joint, like my mics-a-bong
u don't know how to battle, much less write-a-song/
so why u even botherin, just go off-and-quit
if u was wearin diapers u still couldn't be rockin-shit/
i peeped out ya pic dawg, u ain't beatin-me
wearin that tux, lookin like a fake ass p.diddy/
i ain't trippin over ya, i don't stress-fags
but don't u fuckin touch me cuz thats not how men-act/
man i can tell that u haven't done many-text
cuz none of ya shitty lyrics even makes any-sense!/

~k-SkAnDaLuZ 06-24-03 10:42 AM

haha cool yo. i thought u werent gonna show, but it's good u did. yo that battle had me crackin up yo. hahaha. may the best emcee win...

-BonicS- 06-24-03 03:32 PM

**posting your lyrics is gay because this is audio not text**

Flyweight:
Flow-your flow was ok, but your stop and go was annoying
beat-the beat was dope, whats the name of it?
punches-I didn't see much punches much from u
personals-no personals from u
multies-your multies were OK
creativity-your creatvity was OK, but it wasn't eye catching
voice-your voice is straigh
delivery-your delivery was good for this beat
quality-quality is good, nothing was wrong with it
what i didn't like from u is that you talked more about your skills than you talked about your opponent, and you took canibus style

i'll wreck-this-bitch, u can't text-for-shit
^um homie this is ayo, im proud if he can't text
The beat was to tight
White Rabbit:
Flow-your flow was OFF!!!
beat-was tight..
punches-your punches were OK,
personals-no personals, i didn't see any
multies-your multies was OK
creatvity-not much creativity, just saying that you were going to crack his neck,leg,arm and shit
voice-your voice was iigh, i can tell your white
delivery-your delivery was off..
quality-your quality was not very good, your beat was to high,and i can hear buzz in the background. u need to learn about noise reduction

man i can tell that u haven't done many-text
^that made no sense^

vote-White Rabbit..HIs verse had punches, and original style. If i was to vote on flow i would give it to scan though..

~k-SkAnDaLuZ 06-25-03 04:41 PM

aight yo, pretty good explanation -BonicS-. yo, are there anymore votes????????????????

- i'm uppin this

P-bulletz 06-26-03 12:37 AM

Good good "White Rabbit" but wuts wit da picture at the end it is prbably Cause you wanna get crushed like that.or ... you tell me
but my vote .. ok you got it

C-NiCe 06-26-03 01:05 PM

Well
 
Imma vote for skandaluz...

reasons are that his verse was plain raw...i think if you battling sum1 punches are a big factor, but not all the time, cuz eventually punches just get repeated unless u think if shit differently..... i wasn't really feeling white rabbit's punches....they were simple, more as if this battle was text more than it was audio....u did pretty good tho, don't get me wrong, just keep elevatin,

skandaluz got straight to the point, he spit wat he felt, flow was ok, not perfected cuz it seemed like you rushed ur words a bit or delayed them at sum points of the track, but overall you got this victory....if you want we can battle just holla back under this response and i'll set sumtin up....ONE


Vote = SKandaluz

~k-SkAnDaLuZ 06-26-03 11:14 PM

thanx for the vote C-Nice. as for battlin you, i'd love to sometime but not right now cuz i got some other battles against some cats on other boards. are there anymore votes out there? uppin

C-NiCe 06-27-03 02:43 PM

iight man....just let me know when you want to or not...


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