Am I Still Living?
 

Am I Still Living??

My mind is still operating...
I can't think of what just occured, but seems like ages ago
Deep in thought and so disturbed, Aching head to toe
Im still pulsing blood through out my body, why do I feel numb
I can remember every event in my life, but none of this one

My lungs are still breathing...
I can feel my hot breath on my hand, im breathing heavily
Trying to inhale every last bit of air, counciousness is gaining steadily
I feel as if my lungs are collapsing every time I take a deep breath
Try to speak with the little air ive gained but theres bairly any left

My mucles are still strong..
But stiff, As if someone had pulled on them with all there strength
Im remembering a run now, a run to safty but I didnt make the length
I can feel blood pouring out of my muscles like daggers still in them
Bruises engulf my entire body like black and blue pigeons, did I try to defend?

My heart as failed..
I dont here my heart beat anymore, im getting nervous
Am I still alive, or have I been attacked by deaths curses
Im seeing those whitelights everyone has refered 2
Masked men hudling over me, am I in the emergancy room...

To be continued...

Uppin for feedback!

nice shit man, keep dat shit tight,i was feelin it

holla,



-Purple Haze

^^ Thanks Up!

its not ILL .. you could greatly improve...

go join the RBTL (rap battles topical league)

they give you a topic and you then you write a 16-48 liner on it...

-Sureal

Okay thanks Sureal
Will do

this is some tight shit i liked this alot,.......

Uppin for feedback!

this was a dope drop. broke down the topic into fragments and blazed it. and it is a dope topic indeed. you had some multis in there which complimented the flow. plus i seen a lil story telling talent in there. overall nice drop.