F R E E S T Y L E P O E T R Y
 

Aight here we go....

Sometimes...

Sometimes i wonder what life has in store
Sometimes i wonder y im selfish to the core
Sometimes i hate when my freinds talk to each other
Sometimes i hate puttin myself in front of muhfuckers
Sometimes i hate when u say i put it all on you
Sometimes i hate when u say, "its me, not you"
Sometimes i still catch my self wanting to say "i lu-lu-"
Sometimes i get pissed off till i spray muh-fuckas
Sometimes i love when im truthful and u say "yea right"
Sometimes i love when we talk all night about ryhmes
Sometimes i hate it when u flip urself and go to him
Sometimes i wanna start war but i cant cuz its my friend
Sometimes i say "maybee ill kill some one cuz jail is all i got"
Sometimes i hear u think, and breathe when u speak and sudenly stop
Sometimes i love you, actually ur allways on my mind

Sometimes i know u can never be mine, at any time, day or night, so i tell u in ryhmes that sometimes i like u, other times i say love just to spite you, some times u make me somad when cuz u say ur ugly, other times, ur brains and ur beauty just mugs me, sometimes i rap to you, other times i avoid to snap on you, sometimes i say things other times i just try, sometimes i run over puppies with bow ties sometimes i wish that i could go back in time, and sweet talk instead of playin the friend card so ud be mine, sometimes i do get jealous and possesive, like when i bombed on that kid for sendin u love letters, sometimes i think, i shoulda stopped writing a while ago, and the reality is, i can never let you go, go go go o no....

^^ just let shit out, didnt know it read like that....

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I either liked this piece a lot so i just posted it all. Speechless.

Or more likely, i need to get my post signs up to provide some sort of compensation for my small penis...

great freepost technique

Well Kapone, I'm the freeposter here at RB and I decided to make your thread my next victim since it looks so lonely.

I've read this a few times and didn't know if I should respond since it's a touchy subject. I liked this, like most of the other stuff you've posted. You're a good writer and I usually read what you put up here.

When you write, you always do good at putting up a picture of how you feel. And it looks like you feel pretty bad in this one. I don't know what else to say about it. The whole thing was good, the content, flow, words used..all of it. It was a good read.

Sometimes i hate when u say i put it all on you
Sometimes i hate when u say, "its me, not you"

some times u make me somad when cuz u say ur ugly,

Those were the lines that I liked to most.

didnt expect that...........

uh, i just kinda wrote, hit me up on yahoo, i can do the same on a mic, i dont put thought, i just let things flow out

its like that religion where u talk in toungs, i just close my eyes and type, i formatted the first linnes that started with sometimes, then the rest i was like fuck it, and started typing...............

Kapone I can relate to many of the situations described in your post. Thanks for sharing that, too many are too timid about exposing that type of flow. I think it's a great way to vent, and let some of that accumulated frustration we all have out...Props....

Very nice Kapone. It was raw, on the edge. Just full of emotions, that the akwardness and other flaws were over-shadowed by it..

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it sucked a dick dude.....

sorry thats the way it is and is gunna be, i can talk a bunch of shit to you cuz ur ban, fuckin net-thug

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I say "it sucked a dick dude" because i know from experience..

^LMAO @ him and varentao's lil edit ;)