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Content 06-17-03 07:03 AM

around the world and back..this is for you
 
salute to those not using weed as a ghostwriter "pos"

the past is the past im past it dont ask if
I would ever like to change the way that
anythings happened a couple minute of
your time and ill break it down a now
I paid no child support when me and
my mic divorced without you im on life
support trying to take the righteous
course I believe in fate as well but times
are hard from night to morn what dosent
kill makes stronger walkin through the night
the storm will I last much longer feelin
like heaven an hell on split screen burning
and drownin within my surroundings its seems
difficult to eclipse things at times life in general
to cope with it all I script subliminals I really
wondered if id make it to my twenties at the
age of nineteen with the turning date
approachin depression an anxiety can only
bring out another side of me just tryin to learn
up on life lessons for the life of me exemplifying
the personal courage to flourish within this
organizations of patrons when events keep
occuring like this you might assume you cant
make it with no need to front or fake it page
you represent all the fun that i could ever have
nowadays I dont even like to drink or blaze
im only thinking of you ive been around the
world and back should I stay or should I go
I just want on the right track while theres a fork
in the road im bring put to the test the choice to stop
smokin cess has opened me chest I only hope for
success not broke with much less I think of you
when I think of the future mos def believe me


yall probaly dont remember me and thats probaly fine
if you just decided to look this over though...thank you..

peace

Content 06-17-03 06:26 PM

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ILLusions 06-17-03 07:40 PM

I like this.............

like heaven an hell on split screen burning
and drownin within my surroundings its seems
difficult to eclipse things at times life in general

^^^^^^
this shot out at me quick. I really felt this poem. I understand what you are saying even if I didn't go through all that this says. Keep droppin'.......we need more poetry writters in here.

Content 06-18-03 10:25 PM

THANKS'

west 06-18-03 10:29 PM

good poem dawg,wasn't feelin tha flow then reolized it was a poem,with that said i was feelin tha shit and tha word choice and expressiobn was good.

Peace

Content 06-19-03 01:11 AM

thank u

Flip 06-19-03 04:35 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by ILLusions
I like this.............

like heaven an hell on split screen burning
and drownin within my surroundings its seems
difficult to eclipse things at times life in general

^^^^^^
this shot out at me quick. I really felt this poem. I understand what you are saying even if I didn't go through all that this says. Keep droppin'.......we need more poetry writters in here.


strait up.....nice.....nice....nice..........keep it up

Content 06-19-03 01:02 PM

thanks for copying area code

Content 06-20-03 01:26 AM

uppidy

Content 06-22-03 11:50 PM

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Content 06-23-03 06:00 AM

okay....


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