**Cin Laaaadin**
 

heres a verse..feed bacc would be great..it sounds better in audio tho...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/youngk9music.htm
"RUMBLE"

but here:

Fucc all tha bullshit & talkn im stompn in heavy/
im preparn tha wurld cuzz yall faggotz aint ready*
& im killn 4 tha feddi, i top u off & u cough dripz/
& if u actn like a bitch, then imma treat u like a bitch*
then i flip this shit & rip the game & whoz in it/
ill buss kicc-flips on ya like Jereme Rogers did it*
imma gangsta in DC's u ce me and freeze/
ill snipe u out in DC wit 1 easy squeeze*
ill bring ya down 2 ya knees cuzz u feeln me speak/
im fillen em up wit enuff heat 2 leave em in streetz*
believe its G, 4 tha reasonz it Be/
im the hardest kid 2 rap & put holez in ure cheek*
im killin this beat (oh) im killn tha weak (yea)/
drillin em wit war musicc so they feeln tha defeat*
truss me, that Girl Skateboard knoccz ya noggn/
bitch aint no fuccn COMPTON!!*

thass it...feedbacc please!!!


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Cin Ladin

Dumb
wasnt feeling any of this except heading back to open mic

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well thass coo...i NEVER do text....i juss figured..hey im bored..ill post my lyricz...like I SAID...IT SOUNDS BETTER IN AUDIO...

i dont doubt it
Just critisizing it

Yo would sound better in audio most definately dawg.

Peace

ewyu
 

ok Cin, Ive never ead any of your shit, but here goes my analyis:

1. This is a good AUDIO piece, but not a good open mic...in open mic if you write audio shit it just sounds like your saying random shit to make i rhyme (Which is what audio is.) In open mic peeps like shit with feeling or deep thought behind it...this would be a nice piece for audio, not for open mic...but if ya put it to the beat from "X" by Xzibit, it sounds tight as fuck.

~1~ A2Z

that was stupid

hell yea.. this a definite audio piece.

the multis will bless the whole flow..


but in open mic.. you need a topic.. this just sounds like a freestyle (keystyle).

What up dawg, I think the audio would sound pretty cool. Personally, I think the text could have been alot better. I think it's just too plain and basic. No disrespect homie. If you got time, check out my first drop on RB. Keep Elevating.

need alot of work dawg

but it was iight

yea cin...



all of your audio shit is hott...


and make this an audio track and it will be hott...


-nuff said-

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thancz 4 all the feedbacc...yea i juss figured id post sumthn in here....

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Cin Ladin

audio stylez needed cause it comes across as dumbass written

not hatin just statin