B.R.E Presents:"I’m devoted to you"
 

::::I’m devoted to you::::

Verse 1:
my tenderly love, goes above, a strikingly beautiful dove...
other commitments, I give them a shove, only for my belove...
I’ll make space, nothing can replace your prescience...
I just wanna embrace, nothing can erase your compliance….
Your like fine lace, a gorgeous face, I’m a disgrace...
I could leave this earth, without a trace, no criminal case...
Since my unwanted birth, Described as a waste, my talents dearth…
Milked injury’s, for all there worth, to get a glimpse of your attention…
When we talk, all we mention is the slender tension…
You act like I’m in a 3rd dimension, a unwanted extension…
A star trek convention go-er, my social status couldn’t be lower…

Hook x2
I want your emotion – to be attractive like the ocean…
I want your devotion – to give me a social promotion…
I want to live my life in slow motion – to witness your fitness…
You always on my wish list, I persist to assist your existence…

Verse 2:
I’m a like a flame thrower, throwing fire to your life…
My persistence is slower, to have you as my wife…
Other catz I strife, fuck them up with a 12 inch knife…
When I get writers block, your unlock, my hidden force…
You never mock, you’re the source to keep me on course….
I can never foresee our divorce, you filled me with remorse…
On past convictions, you made no protest’s against my parole restrictions…
My ancient drug addictions, our life is like a roller coaster portrait depiction…
You’re the only one who listens, our attraction glistens, in the afternoon sun…
Although our downfall has begun, our appeal will never be outdone…
I knew you were the one, we have so much fun, a story like the prodigal son…

Hook x2
I want your emotion – to be attractive like the ocean…
I want your devotion – to give me a social promotion…
I want to live my life in slow motion – to witness your fitness…
You always on my wish list, I persist to assist your existence…

(distant (spoken))
Our love is nearly over, we came from nowhere,
We swear to keep in contact, with prayer…
Don’t’ despair; there is nothing, which we can’t repair…

(rapping)
don’t dare compare, us to R and J, it’s just unfair…
that one small tear, could erupt so much flare..
your always there, to scare me away from a immoral affair…
we gotta prepare, for the end, this we can’t mend…
no longer can we pretend, that you’re my best friend…
with a slug to heaven I ascend, only to be struck with sins, and descend…
you – I depend on, to extend an arm of friendship to…
love is for the chosen few, you know, I’m Devoted To You…

Hook x4
I want your emotion – to be attractive like the ocean…
I want your devotion – to give me a social promotion…
I want to live my life in slow motion – to witness your fitness…
You always on my wish list, I persist to assist your existence…

This Was Pretty...You Must Be In Love With That Person....This Was A Real Nice Drop Though..Stay Up..

i liked it..




mulits are well done throughout



but i didnt like the ''hooks''


but good spit

thanx peeps..

uppin for some more feedback

Good shit right here...sounds like you in love homes....ill drop

Deep Piece Fam , U really Love this Girl , Its Nice too see an Emcee showing their Emotional side , Ill Piece Fam , Upping this for my Family

man alotta love in dis thread ;p nah was tight i felt it fo sure keep it fam

i'm into the whole emotional side
is this for someone?
anyway nice drop FAM....
stay up.....

^^^not really, lol^^^

I do stuff like this from time to time just to keep a variety of rap, you ever been like really shy 'bout asking someone out, well yea = thats me..lol