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dreamer 06-18-03 05:25 PM

The black culture
 
We so systematic, little shit keeps us "ecstatic"
"entertained", life is "erratic", but they keep us "trained"
cant get shit unless "they had it" nothing or little is "explained"
so we stay "ordained"

So tell me what is your lifes "purpose", your motivation
what keeps you on this earths "surface" ruled by "domination"
want an "explanation" we got low "expectations"

No one gives a fuck you got "knowledge" and your suceesful,
wheter you drop out of highschool or go to "college" and the road was "stressful"

They just wanna know what can we do for them, cant be a part of the "fruit" if you not part of the stem, but people keep they mouths on "mute" our future is "dim"

One of lives "lesson" to be "learned", who gives a fuc if you "stressin" see the next man down you should be "concerned"
a helping hand is not "earned", but givin, the bible says you could get "burned" by the way you livin.

Niggas is killing niggas no "exaggeration", we need to come togheter one big "collaberation", put our thoughts togeter alot of "elaboration", be a people under one world one God and one nation.

Bash 06-18-03 07:33 PM

This Piece was Nice Man

Johnny 6-feet 06-18-03 08:24 PM

^^do fucks never give proper feedback anymore?^^

bar structure needs work, its difficult to pick up the rhythm. the concept was ok, the multis were well placed, the vocab was strong.

originality is 50% of illness. keep posting.

Dark Lord Nykon 06-18-03 09:28 PM

I dunno wasnt feeling this at all

west 06-18-03 09:53 PM

felt this,but isn't tha question why r peeps killin peeps not jus niggas killin niggas dawg,Anyway this was a descent drop with good multi's and good vocab.

Peace


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