just a bum
 

im never alone in physical form, but in emotional form, alone is wat ive become
life is just long, theres no end for me, no sun, no chance to redeem myself, convicted criminal.prisonier in my own mind..what have i done . . . .
Nothing can help me pull my self out of depression, peoples faced are masked, subject of friends...out of the question
i thought that by trying to find out who i wasnt i stumble on who i am
no such luck tho im stranded...looks like ill never come across my chance
so here i am stripped naked of my pride, nowhere to hide, my heart stops...dreams subside
i feel myself collapse...i have found out who i am not, but still dont have a clue who iam
is this where i belong...i look for signs that i can
pick myself up out of this state of unconsciousness
but here lie...wading in my own self unhappiness
unable to shake my self from this horrible nightmare
that has become my life.....is anyone willing to share
one moment with me so i can get it all off my chest
or are you all wrapped up in your own little lives..unable to talk to me cause you think that im waste
you just walk by me withought looking, thro a couple f cents at my feet like its supposed to make you feel better
you walk pasxt e with your unbrellas and watch me tug on my sweater as the rain makes me wetter
none of you stop to see how i am, help me up give me some money or shelter from the damp
afraid to fall asleep at night in fear of never waking up
hypothermia seeping thru my bones like venom
i feel it coming on....still you keep walking on
and when i die who the fucks gonna miss someone like me...just a bum ... lmao

this was another creative drop.
i think this was one of your better ones.
vocabulary was off the hook and everything was good.
check my piece out called the skitzo:me vs. me

nice drop

^^herb^^

very poetic. some good imagery used and an original concept for a piece. multis and bar structure need a little work though.

keep posting.

yeh nice u changed ur style but i mean its a nice and good change...im perverted and english so the title "Just A Bum" i thought was sexual...looooooooool...nice i like da Idea of this

Hey Pledge this was a good drop

liked this alot,where u get tha idea for this drop ?,i thought it was inventive and pretty tight,good stuff.

Peace

DAmn Pledge has alot of Fans..lol

Nice drop Boo......Fosho

dope piece......................-1-

thanks very much for all you replies sorry i havent been on for a while....i was *in* a show lol ..il explain later..omg i have fas *yay* lol to be honest i didnt actually kno where this came from..jsut started typing it all out lol oh well yous seemed to like it :) thankssssss