i dont care if u peep or not....im just so happy!
 

"DreAMs Do Come True"

i never really thought of falling now,
i never really expected this
Talking you for the first time
already made my heart beat

So from then on, you were a dream
i thought i could never reach
i thought you were just mere reflections,
of what's buried in my heart so deep
i was surprised!

you too had fallen for a girl,
a girl who had been dreaming
of you all along
my heart was filled with joy
i realized my dreams were coming true!
what's best about everything
is when you finally said
"I LOVE YOU!"

is there a link between this and the whole ------KaPOnE roCKS mY BoDy lIke SluGs fRoM a 12 Gay-GE ShoTTy------- looooool

this was nice i like short sentenced poems...makes it easier to take in...like a willy IM GUESSING.....(just ingore that) anyway i liked this alot but u cud have made it more length but it seems nice...has this actually happened and thats why ur so happy...nice stuff agen

awww babey i felt that shyt....is it a true story - by the way it was writen i could tell that it was

happy for you too!!!

keep da peace ya heard . .. . fashow

da hunnet

Heh, nice work nitty...

...and nice to know youse happy..(gawd damn, knew i should've made my move sooner..gah!..)..

..but yeah, seriously. Nicely put onto paper. Was what it was. And couldn't have been with a nicer guy than Kapone (i mean nice in an obscure, sewer searching, rat eating way...!...and i don't mean that in the way you might think...more in the creative way...oh frig it, i'm only kidding..i'll leave it at that...though Kapone might understand...)..

..resp...

*applause*
good ish...
i liked the true life aspect...

not really...i put that on my sig cuz he beat me on yahoo fighter and i lose 10 times or more :( that was just the consequence if i lose LOL...kap was really good ..*shrugs* oh well i aint even good in the real rock, paper, scissor shit anyways...hahaha im a loser!





hmmm...kap is really nice , he's like the second coolest on my hidden list under my bed trapped in some yellowish stuff with a jello and cherry on top LOL (thats how hidden it is)...

lets just say that this one is for someone special that made me soo damn happy like whoa:hairy: , like whoa:eek: , ya know like whoa :cool: and more :whacky: ....like wh....ahhhh yeah kno what i mean....its just like that!



thanks for the replies y'all....i aint really writing for the sake of writing but cuz of the fact that i want this happiness to be shared.....ahhhhhhhh happiness paranoia! (hmmm...nice words for my next poem...hahaha WATCH OUT! )

Damn Shiz............Last nite when i talked to ya u wus tellin me that you Loved ME......and Now This.....damn....lol

Nice poem nice drop felt the contend

peep mine

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58416

I'm glad you love me and all, shiznit, but I can't say I love you. We're just moving way to fast in our relationship.

Um... for realz though... thats a nice poem to read. For no other reason perhaps then it's just plain upbeat.

~Shalom~

hmm....not you necro...actually the one behind you who is waering a white t-shirt...;)

but thanks...its simple but it came straight from the heart

I usually only read threads in here and not post.. but think I will make an exception. I am really happy to see you like this. That guy is very lucky to have someone like you love him. :) About the poem, like all of your writing, I liked that as well. Keep up the good work. :D

*drives into thread in 3 whellin caddy and opens fire with a 12 gauge*

*joins Kapone with an uzi*

damn Kapz bustin caps, how incredably ironic


good poem shiznit...


do you look as good as your avatar?

errr....better ;)..LOL


thanks for droppin by anyways....glad u liked it

omg, does this means what i think it means? lol

btw, nice poem lol

i dont know what ur thinking tory....hit me up on aim...LOL...


but im thinking i know but im just pretending not to....thanks !