Dedicated
 

I speak simplicity, yet the meaning is deeper/
I claim it's my soul but my heart is my keeper/
It leads me to place where guilt follows my reason/
To a place where paranoia is always in season/
Just keep breathing, that's the main focus of being/
But every thought is contradicted with every image I'm seeing/
Constantly pleading, while daggers threaten their entrance/
The whole crowd watches, but only one listens/
This solo ear of a sad face appears stained with tears/
For like spirits of the same fate, these two hold the same fears/
Through cries and cheers, seperating truth from what is false/
The body is not truly alive if it carries no pulse/

Dayum Ma..This Was VERY Nice,I Was Really Feelin This Mos Def..Love Ya Vocab..Nice Drop BabyGul..


Drop Me Sum Love On "Alone" Pleez

hey chick
 

WOW!! feels weird to be back ..but i guess imma reply...no one is gonna remember me..lol. Nice piece Chicky fry..(just made that up)...but ne way...keep ya head up...you'll make it...and tha paranoia...it'll be hard..but you'll get through it..God bless..1..

Was a nice piece Baby Vocab was nice
An Overall Enjoyable read

Thanx-

that was nice........a lil short but I was feelin' it. Keep droppin'..................

I'm glad to be reading your stuff again. This poem kind of went over my head, which is to say I didn't really understand it. But I can still appreciate it's awesometivity.

And yes, awesometivity IS in fact, a word.

~Shalom~

*kicks flower at babygee*...that's for not posting here for so long...sorry, but i've goe me orders..

Onto the piece. Very nice as always. You captured the essence of being alive, yet not connected to your soul...in a 'purpose' like way...for one reason or the other...very well...

..well that's oine of the meanings i got out of it...it just had an effortless thing going with it....especially with the ending...

...resp...

Re: hey chick
 

And where the hell have you been? *throws peach but does not bruise*...damn freezable peaches...



Yes, your name rings a bell baby blues. No worries...

lol...man...this dude is so violent!!! i think as we are cousins..we should give a personal family beat down...lol...jp..God bless..1

LOL, the poem is basically saying how very few people understand me and therefore i should hold onto those who do...and as i can tell by the response to this piece no one understands the piece lol therefore they cannot understand me either. holla.

^^Really?! That was the first meaning i got out of it!!

But then i dug deeper. Especially how you ended it, made me dig that little bit more deeper...

...decieving...(!)...

Baby Blues - You wouldn't be able to handle the ferocity of my banana-grape attack, like...(!)...

...and with that, i'll stop clogging up this thread...(otherwise Deacon will biotch slap me...you heard BIOTCH (slap) me...see what i did there?!)...

eyo babygirl that shyt was too tyte...although like the rest i really couldn't understand until i second read ya piece...it was deep with emotion of rawness and i resp that...

i loved the lines...:::....

Just keep breathing, that's the main focus of being/
But every thought is contradicted with every image I'm seeing/

holla

eh holla at my latest ish...its not that great - jus wrote it to write something...holla

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58912

and she's back too....damn...
still writing nicely..short but meaningful
i liked the way it was worded and the expression.
good piece..

one love

Where the hell are you all coming from?! Where you all been? And don't say woodwork...cos i smell rotting!