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off the dome getting at other fools in other rooms lemme know what you think. Dont bite becuase ill know if you are or not copywrite or non.

Information for ----------, this is quite absurd/
this is my first time at this forum and I already see your a nerd/
You must have broken wings/
When we trow down you can use nijitsu or karate/
Bad news for ya/
I pack a shotty/
They wont be able to identify your body/
Your giveing me the impression/
You wana get involved in my rap submission/
Put your body in the woods and have the CIA questions/
1st lession dont try and go against Mr.Yuckus/
Im known to cause a Ruckus/
Just dont trust us\


You'll quickly get snatched up for your beer and weed/
Where I come from someone talkin about hanburgers you sound like a dweeb/Look you chump you need to call someone thats gonna have your back/
Goin heads up with me is like over doseing on crack/
Im the only real virus like the west nile disease/
please stop with your phony rhymes you sound like a kid from chucky cheese/
A punk 3rd grader with a vinarial disease/
You cought maria laria from your sister thats portugease/
Your always found on your knees/
God put you on this earth to please/
My rhymes burn with a 3rd degree/

Me defeated?
You must be slamming herion between your toes/
becuase if you think you can shine in a keystyle flow/
Your nuthing but a giggeling furby high off the sherm and drow/
I dont think you herd me/ WERE LOOSEING HIM/
Flat line on your pc/WERE SKREWING HIM/
I already passed ya to my homie/-------------> (med phed)
Im done with you rookie your nuthing but a phony/
"someone smell that ballony aka bolagna"
for that ingnant dummy/

You can tuck your nuttz and assume the posstion and cluck/
your a fuking duck/
in the direction your going your most likely gonna fall/
Guns spittin rounds sound like spit wads through straws/
Central Intelegance Agency gets me and my pc/
Starts Asking suspicious questions about the disapearance of an internet mc/
Spot light in my face where were you on june 19th/
Lucky MetaPheddy was my alaby/
You say whats up /
ill end it with a fuck you and good bye/
I get away with murder everytime/

I smell an skunk/
as i patroll these threads i stumble apun more chumps/
i know those arent my lyrics you think your biteing/
because my whole crew is like a nest of termites that like fighting/

Lemme Keep My Mouth Shut And Jus Give Ya Positives..Only Way Is Up...Elevate

o0

neds help
but hey we all do sumtimes

not very good. Im not hating, i only wanna see you elevate, so here:

Expand your vocab and work on your wordplay. That was a very basic rhyme, and a lot of stuff was boring or played out. For example, the boddy, shotty thing, see it all the time.

Throw in some multies, spice it up

and rap about a topic. rhymes that lead no where are very very boring to read, and are sorta annoying.

again, not hatin, jus tryin to help. good luck, keep posting, youll do fine

Peace