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Mr. Rogers 06-20-03 05:59 AM

B.R.E Presents:Disguising Death
 
Already Turned In His Grave..
Body Buried Deep In The Back Of An Undisturbed Cave..
His Whole APhysical Apperance Has Disappears..
Although His Body Isn't In Sight His Soul Re-appears..
Death Has Died And This Is The Birth Of His Son..
Claiming Every Soul He Can With Illuminatic Force..
Jousting With Heaven's Angel's,Win Or Loss He Continues His Course
Chants Death Is Comin As He Closes In On His Prey
Once Death Strikes ,Theres Nothing You Can Do You're Dead Where You Lay..
Death Isn't In A Super-Natural State..
He Dares You To Disrespect Him And If You Do You've Sealed Your Fate..
He Tricks You By Disguising Himself In Human Form..
Looks And Sounds Like A Human But With Powers Far From The Norm..
His Name Is Death,Both Viscious And Lethal..
Its Such A Damn Shame How He Has No Respect For God And STeals The Precious Life Away From People....

I Wrote This Durin Science Awhile Ago..

Mr. Rogers 06-20-03 11:15 AM

Uppin This Piece....

filed 06-20-03 12:39 PM

hey shows science class is good for something

yeah this was good liked the way you imagnined it all and put it on paper keep pumpin like that and check my shit some time

Mr. Rogers 06-20-03 04:32 PM

LoL...Thx..Uppin

Mr. Rogers 06-20-03 08:04 PM

^^^'n

Mr. Rogers 06-21-03 01:46 AM

Uppin Once More..

Mr. Rogers 06-23-03 11:14 PM

This Got Majorly Slept On...

DaGyrlRemarqabL 06-25-03 06:23 PM

Sup Que..Too bad this piece got slept on, shows mad potential on your part. Strong Imagery and very captivating choice of words, you made the whole aura and presence of death very believable to the reader. Nice writez, no doubt.
Stay up with this n keep blessin us.
Dont mind them sleeperz.
Thanks for the PM by the way.
Peace.

Mr. Rogers 06-25-03 11:09 PM

^^Thx Alot Ma..

shiznit 06-25-03 11:44 PM

wow...the whole death and life situation concept came out strong...

i was gonna do something about death awhile back..i mean like my views and shit...but it never really occur to me of doing...lol

but the flow was nice...


good ish man...
keep droppin

Mr. Rogers 06-26-03 10:13 AM

Thx..


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