visulise
 

these colors i see externals of my head
slaughtering my eyes cant blink
....................DEAD
everything is hushed i cant even think

the colors keep lingering where to be found
trying to converse something to me
....................no sound
where to suppress for they cant see

im bewildered theres no way around
losing balance feet wont settle
..............smack... ground
noises coming back acute as a kettle

the colors diminish not like before
their not just outside but in my head
...............door
now i can visulise............


upp this shit something i did quick in english

man start uppin this shiz

I don't know much about poetry but I liked the way you made that flow nice poem, Keep it up

thx babe keep uppin

wtf ppl wake up youve got some uppin to do ive done my fair share so upp this

WAKE UP LAZY MOFO'S...haha...umm - once again ya shyt was dope - eh short and sweet...ya got ya point across...

not one of ya best but i still felt you

holla

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good god man what are you doing? keep uppin ppl thx all

the only thing that about this is the simplistic content that was improved by the the flow and structure of it...


the whole concept of it is definitely unique....

the breakdown of this wouldnt really help a lot so i figured i aint gonna do it .....


but keep dropping some ish...ill keep an eye on u!