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lil_roxy 06-20-03 08:00 PM

At times I hate me
 
aint too good on length wise

At times
I hate it wen my mascara runs,
I hate it wen I think of wot i’ve dun,
u would streach to all out of my reach,
never think u’d be able to touch me so deep,
clearly I wanted u to make it to tha top,
I jus didn’t want u top knock me off my spot,
If u were taller den u would look down on me,
I always feared of wot u really fort of me,
I hate it wen im feelin tha way im feeling,
I hate it wen my emotions are Concealing...

lil_roxy 06-22-03 05:09 PM

I hate it wen im feelin tha way im feeling,
I hate it wen my emotions are Concealing,
U thought I didn’t trust u I trusted u mo den I knew,
Id be scared to look in ur eye u might of seen-through,
In a way I denied all my affection towards you,
If I was true I thought the conclusion was to lose you,
Confusing all my faults lying about what’s rite,
Im sorry dat I ever got involved in your life,

blood__thick 06-23-03 11:32 PM

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blood__thick 06-24-03 01:06 AM

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blood__thick 06-24-03 01:07 AM

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lil_roxy 06-24-03 01:32 PM

wot tha fuc u doin blood thick???????

blood__thick 06-24-03 03:34 PM

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blood__thick 06-24-03 03:34 PM

my bad just gettin my posts up a little bit thats all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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lil_roxy 06-26-03 04:48 PM

well u do dem sumwer else like

shiznit 06-26-03 05:54 PM

*shakes head* newbies...


i would be pissed off if someone would just post nonsense shits on my thread....


well rox...ur piece is really good...not bad at all....

i like the content...it showed ur emotions really...

keep droppin

SmoothCrmnl 06-26-03 09:11 PM

eyo for real...for shyt like that id be pissed too - messin up the ora of ya flow...but anyway..........

i loved ya piece - it was spoken/written from a true poet ----holla

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BabyGurl68 06-28-03 03:35 AM

good shit roxay, flowed real well, reader friendly, spoken truth, just liad out, nice, keep it up hopefully ill be readin more from u , i havent been around n a while but im gettin back into it again,

Tutti 06-29-03 02:29 AM

i think all of you are good poets.just keep doing what you do o.k.
Ilove all of it.

lil_roxy 06-29-03 10:23 AM

aight cheers yall fo reply to ma piece much lve!
peace ~ROX~


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