<~~My Skillz~~>...tell me what you think...
Listen;
^Check-it^, Best ^respect-it^, Cuz you could never get ^next-ta-it^, I'm da ^best-ta-spit^, N' leave ya ^chest-ripped^! Forget tryin' ta ^grab-this^, It's da ^maddest^, N' ^phattest^, You couldn't reach it if ya bought "the sky's the limit" ^ladders^! ^One-of-a-kind^, Folks want it but it's ^mine^, Put ^gunz-ta-spines^, N' ^re-aligne^, I can't help the fact I have ^fun-wit-rhymes^! A killer wit ^lyrical-gats^, Once you ^hear-it-it's-phat^, Can't come ^near-cuz-ur-wack^! ^Bust-brains^, ^Cuss-names^, It rips emcees n' makes ^guts-rain^! Unknown ta ^rookies^, Know ta kill ^pussies^, Urgin' ta release ammo, so homies don't ^push-me^! The one thing you don't ^got^, Can't be beat like ^cops^, As sweet as ^drop-tops^, It's ^top-notch^, Comes out blazin' like ^hot-glocks^! It's original and ^hard-ta-beat^, Fast n' Furious like when Ferrari ^cars-hit-da-streets^, So deadly even if you read it might make ya ^heart-skip-a-beat^! |
Lmao......... Whats up wit all Tha ^ , Lmao , This Piece was Aight , But Make Ur Lines Longer , And Up ur vocabulary and Wordplay..
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wasnt too bad but as bash said that ^^ stuff is crap. you also gotta work on your structure, even lentgh lines.
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^^^ agreed with those two. It needs workd. YOU have potential though. Keep at it
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