Whats with all the bull shit we call life today
 

(THE-EGG-MAN)

ever notice'd that shit allways happens and the worst time/
faggots go round saying that it wont happen to them there'll be doing just fine/
spend your whole life trying for one thing/
just to stop, think, realise that you cant sing/
spend you whole life working for one gole/
have it snatched, taken, then left feeling that you have no sole/
when it comes around and they alow you to be admitted/
get locked up for some shit you never comitted/
what the hells the deal with the world today/
have faggot ass pussy's doing things the wrong way.

an improvement from the last one, (spell GOAL right!), you had some concept and meaning to this one, your vocab certainly improved...for a newbie piece i'd give dis about 5/10,

keep droppin them, the more shit you do, the better you'll get!