MetaSin (0-0) vs. Maddawg_MKN (2-0)
 

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Topic...
In the shadows

checkin in, no doubt.............i'm here, hopefully this kid will show, good luck bra, stay real, peace, 1 luv

p.s. y'all lucky i wont herre last week, becauze my record would be 3-0 right now

dont no show.............................................. ..........i will probably drop tomorra, stay real, peace, 1

his punk ass, no showed, i'm still gonna drop a verse, but i'm savin most of my ish for anotha week, stay real, peace, 1

In Tha Shadows:

U.S. Penitentiary in Atlanta:
Inmate Brooks is trying to fall asleep but too much is rushing through his mind. The pain runs much deeper than the rusted springs pushing through his mattress, inevitably penetrating his back. He begins to tap on the bed frame……a beat forms……

My friends, my family,……no one, could have imagined This-would-Happen/
Everythin’ gone……in tha blink of an eye, it’s Just-too-Tragic/
Tha lord is hangin his head cryin’, and all I keep screamin’ is “I Miss-you-Badly”/
F*** gettin’ caught up in cryme, my moms kept sayin……just Stick-to-Rappin’/
But I’m “Hard Headed”, and I stopped usin’ Scrypts-to-Attack-Men/
I rememba tha days when I used to Spit-to-Relax-And/
Only drop “Hits” to leave Chicks-Askin’/
“Are you gonna be famous, can your Spits-bring-Cash-In?”/
I didn’t know about that, but loot helps bring Tits-and-Ass-In/
I soon got greedy, and that’s also when Shit-got-Drastik/
Anxiety set in, lyfe was goin no where, I needed to Rip-inta-Action/
I forgot about tha ish I truly luved, and started makin’ Hits-with-Masked-Men/
I stopped playin ball, so F*** handlin’ tha rock, soon I couldn’t even Hit-tha-Basket/
I put tha Bible down, and my morals Split-inta-Fractions/
But finally money was rollin in, so actually Bricks and Chips-were-Stackin’/
I f***ed so many dirty hoes, soon I was branded and Listed-with-“Trash-Dick”/
I kept gettin’ lucky, runnin strong even afta Ten-transActions/
Actually, I was barely survivin’, no wonder enemies…slash...Friends-were-Laughin/
I soon became worse off than a deaf illiterAte-with-Captions/
Deals were turnin’ bad, and I was goin downhill fasta than a Lyft-when-Crashin’/
I happened to be more prone to enemies, than an elderly laydees’ Hips-and-Accidents/
Murderers were close on my trail, so I found a way to Trip-them-Bastards/
I formed a partnership, invited my boy “D” inta Kick-some-Ass-……When/
Exactly, one day before he would Head-inta-Action/
A hitman named Leroy, pushed Lead-inta-his-Back-And-Abdomine/
It reminded peeps of Kennedy, just lyke him……my boys skull Split-inta-Fragments/
I’ll neva forget tha day, when I saw his lyfeless body Gripped-with-Plastic/
Lastin’ impressions, bein one of tha men slowly Lyftin-his-Casket/
At tha funeral, I glared at tha heavens and Envisioned-tha-Masses/
Tha mornin’ family bowed their headz as they Listened-for-Passage/
People say lyfe is hard, but death……Isnt-it-Tragic/
Ish became personal, and now……clips (friends) would Visitin’-this-Faggot/
Rage burned insyde of me, and tha killa’s name Slipped-through-sum-Cracks-And/
Hatred quickly devoured my soul,…so inevitably…This-is-what-Happened/
I loaded up on heavy artillery and ammo, this Mission-was-Havoc/
Decisions-were-Drastik, I ran insyde of Leroys crib and Delivered-a-Package/
Afta drenchin his ish with gasoline, I left Leroy Quiverin-at-Matches/
He would soon realize, This-wasn’t-tha-Half-Of-It/
Gas wasn’t enough, I detonated sum explosives……Shiverin-was-Massive/
Soon enough, Leroy is crackin’ all up, believe me……it Isn’t-cause-he’s-Laughin’/
I can’t go inta any details, because I could actually be Aquitted-for-this-Action/
Lets put it this way, no matta what……I R.I.P.ed-that-Faggot/
I’ve seen my moms once since bein here, she’s Miserable-and-Staggerin’/
I called her Anna K., tha way she gave me tha backhand, lyke she Flipped-tha-Racket/
Its shitty, livin eryday surround by nothin’ but Men-with-Shackles/
Expensive-Habits/ I’m now barricaded by cell bars, slowly rottin’ away In-tha-Shadows/

Too bad this bitch NO SHOWED
Peace

lyft it for feedback, aight, stay real.............................................. .........................peace, 1 luv

very nice shit man.....liked this drop alot
good flow and imagery and shit
dope shit...too bad the other dude failed to show woulda been ill

liked these lines alot

I forgot about tha ish I truly luved, and started makin’ Hits-with-Masked-Men/
I stopped playin ball, so F*** handlin’ tha rock, soon I couldn’t even Hit-tha-Basket/
I put tha Bible down, and my morals Split-inta-Fractions/
But finally money was rollin in, so actually Bricks and Chips-were-Stackin’/
I f***ed so many dirty hoes, soon I was branded and Listed-with-“Trash-Dick”/
I kept gettin’ lucky, runnin strong even afta Ten-transActions/
Actually, I was barely survivin’, no wonder enemies…slash...Friends-were-Laughin

thanx bro, nyce lookin with tha feedback, i'll hit your ish up in a min, stay real, peace, ...........................1 luv

damn dawg... that sucks to have someone no show on a good verse like that, i was feelin it all throughout your verse... keep it up man, that shit was nice

Here are my five:
1. Battle: Addlibb vs. Ill-Mental http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60050
2. Battle:Younggadget vs. T-square
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60063
3. Battle: A2Z vs. Simile
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60061
4. Battle: Mad Man vs. Fgee http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60047
5. Battle: every otha battle i tried to vote on was eitha no showed, or tha pole was closed, you cant vote if tha pole is closed, right, so i have no options.......this should not be held against me

we need more people battlin, stay real, peace, 1 luv,

p.s. just incase i dont find a sign out thread, i am goin on vacation once again, startin tomorra and i will not be back until tha 6th, so please do not place me against anyone next week, i wont be able to show, i will probably be back in time for tha followin weeks battles

....................................by tha way, thanx for tha feed back, and lyft it for more, you kno you kats luv my style, 3-0