I don't get it
 

Just the other night, you invited me to your house
put your sibling to bed, then made out on the couch
at that time, i loved you more then you could ever know
stayed there so long, i missed my favorite show
but that didn't matter to me
knowing that you were there, beside me
holding my hand, never letting go
looked at your face, knew something was wrong tho
i asked what's wrong, but you said nothing
but i knew there was something
when i got home, i felt really bad
i knew i left you, feeling all sad
a few days had gone by, what happend next
i would have never of guessed
you tell me that you feel smothered
i tried so hard, not to be bothered
you came right out and said it's OVER
now i'll never say, i'll see you tomorrow


It's short but i don't care,
say what you want

this was alright....yeah sometimes poems can be good for venting ya know...this piece is urs and thats how u feel and thats a good thing...

i know u couldve done it better and couldve use more descriptive words and more imagery can be good too...but yeah

i like it!>.keep droppin

yeh thanks

keep uppin

come on people
give me some feedback