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i Deleted it..

Lmao.... WeaK Piece , No Vocab , No Multies , and No Wordplay.... Elevate dawg , and U will get Better , Overall You Get a 4/10

haha yeh i'm just mad
my girlfriend dumped me for some guy
don't have time to think of big words

lol

violence... and i thought I was violent lol dont worry... i need to improve too

Yea like Bash said. Also wasnt feelin the hate towards women in this piece man. Sure ya enraged and all but this wasnt all to good like Kim by Slim Shady.

-Peep my drop: Dear God.
-R.x Out

meh
i don't hate women
i just hate that one

I didnt like this piece.

but you got the potential to elevate, take time with your thoughts and express them with more feelings, even if your feelings towards something is hate.

keep up take the time, and im sure you will become something better then what Ive read.

^ One can be one to many.

wack.........topic was shit.........ur shit...........vocab was about -10/10..........................over all i'd say 3/10............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60416

hit up ma shit

lmao^^^^

yea just stay at it...