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deushy 06-24-03 11:48 AM

no ratter
 
got da mind of a thug nigga but i'd neva do it/
stead i grab da pen n da papa an then we screw it/
rol dem b-l-u-n-t-z is justa mistamean/
can't get pulled ova by dem police es a murder scene/
we keep it glocked in da hood neva kno whos bout/
might be one dem krazed niggas lookin fou a way out/
sayed i'd neva do it and prolly neva will/
but es destined when ya own ppl sayin ya will/
look into my eyez and lemme kno wha u see/
do u see all da pain dat lyez within da agony/
P keep on harazzn me/
wid all da its ta be a secret/
one not to be told but to mean it....................

deushy 06-24-03 11:50 AM

any body got anything to say..>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Verbatim 06-24-03 01:29 PM

it was good man, keep er up, i wasn't a big fan of the whole gangsta way you spelt words, but hahaha s'all good
peace

deushy 06-24-03 03:41 PM

thanks....

deushy 06-24-03 03:42 PM

any more ?>>>>

deushy 06-26-03 05:42 PM

yo can i get more replies.........
uppin>>>>>>>>>>>

shiznit 06-26-03 05:56 PM

this is pretty simple...couldve been better...

but we're elevatin still like you...so keep droppin!

SmoothCrmnl 06-26-03 09:07 PM

eyo kyd - i kind of didn't feel the whole gangsta role this poem/spyt kind of played but i definately got the gist of what you were trying to get across ..like shiznit said - we still elevatin like you playa...fashow

holla

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deushy 07-02-03 12:38 AM

yo thanks ima work on it....
peace

deushy 07-02-03 12:38 AM

any1 else got sumthing to say?>>>>>>>>>>>>>


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