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MR. LEGEND 06-24-03 02:21 PM

The Legend Began...
 
This is just a little taste of the real, most of y'all don't know nothin about this.

We struggle for necessities/1
splurge on the Lexus keys/2
Throw some rims on my truck, all the girls I’m a bust/3
Never thinking about threes days from now, what will catch-up/4
When it rains it pours sometime it never let up/5
We got sneaky niggaz that will bang ya girl/6
It takes two, so you gotta blame ya girl/7
Minimum wage is a joke, do what you gotta do to smoke/8
We hustle for trucks while they cop the boats/9
Secrets of investment kept from the ghetto/10
They string us along like their name is Japetto/11
The credit game is modern day segregation/12
That’s why we worship cash as a representation/13
They even brain washed our parents/14
Who tell us to go to college, education transparent/15
We make the institutions rich, and we can’t find no job/16
Or laid off, no job and the loans never get paid off/17
40 thou and my man made it out, degree with power/18
His first job had him make 9 dollars an hour/19
I fail to understand the logic,/20
Apply for the position and prejudice will stop it/21
That’s why I rather make millions on innovation/22
How could you bust yo back while CEO vacationin/23
But they got us smoked out and lovin it/24
Husslin for rent by shovelin shit???/25
I really don’t think so, so I’ma grab the nine/26
And the next thing I take, I believe it’s already mine/27


Don't bite my shit!!!!

RythmicTendicies 06-24-03 03:36 PM

whats wit the /2, /3 etc..?, i thought people only done that in battle threads?

anyway, the flow i thought was a little bit off, choppy in some places. Vocab was allright, but could do with soem tweaking here and there, but still it was aight....

MR. LEGEND 06-24-03 04:45 PM

yeah you right I just wanted to get somethin up here. My shit ain't really built for the net. I write according to my style & a beat. Folks on here are just the opposite. Good lookin out Holla

Accelerate 06-24-03 04:47 PM

rhythmic just about said it all. im not sayin it was bad, but it wasn't great either....
peep my drops: the lonesome(need a friend) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60643

MR. LEGEND 06-30-03 09:57 AM

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