VIP911 vs. Mad Man
 

10 lines
No D.R. hata or crew
5-0 KO
Let's Go!

yo this battle is whack
u probly rap like this country man named jack
i'm the best u ever did see
u couldn't kiss my shoes and ur the best u can be
im a young man so dont start none
u might throw out ur god damn back son
im the thrilla in vanilla and ur just the doorman
i'll knock ur ass out with the rhyme like george foreman
im done with u cuz this damn rap's through
comon dawg show me wat u can do!

that was aight for a newbe
but i'm pretty sure Mad Man can merk the hell out of that shit
Nice drop VIP911

Good luck Mad Man *not that you need it*

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60641

I was going to have this be a pink slip match.... But I feel bad for you kid...At least you have the guts to battle me. Here it goes.

So kid, it looks like your ass just entered this rap game
Lookin through your lines, and not once do I see my name
To be prewritten is laughable, kinda like 'Jim Carey'
A 'Liar Liar' if you think you won,oh no, quite the contrary
Even if you were playing 'Mortal Kombat', you couldn't put together a decent punch
While I'm knocking in a 'fatality', my lines make you go crunch.
What's the point in me ripping on this kid cause I'm a 'VIP' I know I won
Man this kid needs some help up here, could someone call for '911'


lol, I liked that last line....VOTES

lol Mad Man ya shit was hard
the last line was hilarious
it's obvious you took this
Punchlines
metephors'
merking
flow
everything
Vote= Mad man
*i'll battle you mad man when i become a vet*
holla back at ya whitenigga
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60641

yo man i was just tryin to rhyme
but its obvious with all that jerkin u aint got time
ohh u wanna call 911 well go ahead
u wanna face me when i'm good? ur better off dead
that shit's not prewritten so dont get any ideas
u musta wrote that shit when u were mad. had diarrhea
i aint gonna quit so get used to me
but i guess i aint as good as the gay guy g
im just a boy doin the best i can
yo someone get a straight jacket for this crooked mad man

Uppin for votes
(1st up so the mod's know)

sry cant poll but i gotta go wit mad man LAST LINE WAZ HIALRIOUS!!!
betta punches and flow tho


vote-mad man


get at dis plz//

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0635#post570635

its so obvious who won
vote=mad man
u were makin a joke out of the situation and it still was
hot good shit

oops my bad I 4got check out my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60352

iight mad man took this with athaurity, he fucked 911 up, nice last line, hit my battle from my sigup dawg wit an honest vote its an ill battle

MadMan got this because of:
Flow
Meta
Simi
Mulit
Punch
Perso
Anything that I leave out?

Vote-Mad

POLL VOTE ON THIS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60732

Uppin
Up # 2

respect to vip999 for trying but he got merked. was too elementary in his rhyme scheme. mad man had good flow and a killer last line
vote- mad man

holla bak
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60823