I wrote this when i was writin for tryouts and shit
 

Aight... I'll hit sum shit like...

I let a nigga flow then I come like a "Quiet Storm"
No "Mobb Deep" shit, DOA come in a swarm//
E.M., Denton, K.T., LB Got my back especially
when we got tha skillz dem mc's lack//
I'll send ur ass home wit a DOA blessin
Wit ur wife's blood and hole filled dress 'n//
Ur weddings called off cause ur wife got
caught in a shootout that cost her life//
If she wasnt on tha damn corner
Ur ass wouldnt have to be a mourner//
But u want revenge and cop an AK then u
come afta tha nigga they call J-Day//
U say that i shot ur bitch for fun but
niggaz was shootin so I unloaded my gun//
Ima "Bad Boy For Life" and there aint no changin
when i leave niggaz all fucked up and durangin//
If u want drugs, I got those, if not I got hoes
and since u got whack gear, I'll give u sum tight clothes//
Comin around claim u gangsta in tha wrong
place will end up to a violent life chase//
"Swizz" cheese ya body and have tha bullets bangin "Beatz"
as they coverin u and ur whole family in bloody sheets//
Lookin in my eyes is like havin a nightmare cause
U'll see ur own death in my evil ass glare//
I stay runnin wild and I change my style
Then I kick back and light up a "Black N Mild"//
None of y'all mothafuckas want tha purebred "Pedigree"
Cause u'll get a dose from tha one and only//
I make beats that'll fuckin "Blow Ya Mind", Rapper
and Producer, Shit thats "One of a Kind"//
Everyone know who tha fuck I rep Its a
"Special Delivery" witout "G-Dep"//
Hate on this shit nigga I dont care but when
Im done, I'll know I'll have my "Flava In ya Ear"//
I leave u niggaz stunned wit nothin to say
And mix mad but not as mad as "Jam Master Jay"//
This nigga here will flow wit no doubt and
thats tha end of my shit fuckin bitch, Im out//

Im tired of hatin ass niggaz. So y'know what? Ima post this
shit anyway and let them hataz hate.
I dont give a damn cause y'all niggaz dont phase me one
fuckin bit. Otha than that, let me know whachu think...
Later...

waitin for feedback

Not really feeling this. I know it'll be better in audio, but some things just don't raise eyes in text like they do in audio. Overall, good for audio, not so good for text.

See, now there's an honest person. I like dat. It do sound better in audio cause i was rappin it to myself but i didnt record. I will record it and take it to my friend's house for him to put it on his website if he still has it. Still waitin...

I thought it was aight just need to work on the vocab.............

Hey Man , Keep Spittin This Shit, I Ignore Most New Comers Shit, But You Gotz Potential...

-Sureal

Thank u all for ur coments. I'll keep spittin and workin on da vocab. Still wantin more comments.