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Progression----- Safe ass verse
movin' forward with words of borrowed wisdom?//
don't even know who writ-um, but we still live-um.// like some kinda-sublime divinity, sun-moon-and earth.// tha holy trinity, tha home of injury, spiritule corruption.// an abrupt eruption of assumptions for nothin'.// like punishment for plunderin' the plague then aids.// they came today the same way they will tomorrow.// a will of sorrow so slow to move on an' choose god.// who's not too smart knows he's got to start.// but god it's hard, detox is bar'd from sars consumption.// the scars of progression, proceed with disgression.// walk cautious as well as often wihtout stoppin'.// try'n-a stay on topic, but toppin' it would be better....// copywritten letters, nah, that's why I quote it.// so I wont get; thrown-in; tha hole-again.// I flow again like I was growin' gems; I glitter.// call me J-Lo, heyll no, I mean my booty hang lo but damn, I ain't that same hoe, I'm the main bro.. yo.// if I say so it goes you can't say no, I detain whole crews.// hold you accountable too, you don't know how to be cold dude.// it kinda sucks after "toppin' it would be better"... but whatever |
you rap very indepth n flow vocab metas internals...all nice!!
sorry there ain't no real feed bac jus lettin ya no i liked readin it. ~1~respect |
progression is important...and stagnation is not an option...nice multis and vocab...I liked it until you got to J-lo...looks like you've been contemplating some deep topics lately...keep it movin dunny...check my new joint--Ya'll Hate it...peace
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