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BlUnT-MC 06-25-03 02:25 PM

Progression----- Safe ass verse
 
movin' forward with words of borrowed wisdom?//
don't even know who writ-um, but we still live-um.//
like some kinda-sublime divinity, sun-moon-and earth.//
tha holy trinity, tha home of injury, spiritule corruption.//
an abrupt eruption of assumptions for nothin'.//
like punishment for plunderin' the plague then aids.//
they came today the same way they will tomorrow.//
a will of sorrow so slow to move on an' choose god.//
who's not too smart knows he's got to start.//
but god it's hard, detox is bar'd from sars consumption.//
the scars of progression, proceed with disgression.//
walk cautious as well as often wihtout stoppin'.//
try'n-a stay on topic, but toppin' it would be better....//
copywritten letters, nah, that's why I quote it.//
so I wont get; thrown-in; tha hole-again.//
I flow again like I was growin' gems; I glitter.//
call me J-Lo, heyll no, I mean my booty hang lo
but damn, I ain't that same hoe, I'm the main bro.. yo.//
if I say so it goes you can't say no, I detain whole crews.//
hold you accountable too, you don't know how to be cold dude.//


it kinda sucks after "toppin' it would be better"... but whatever

pot1ent 06-25-03 05:15 PM

you rap very indepth n flow vocab metas internals...all nice!!
sorry there ain't no real feed bac jus lettin ya no i liked readin it.
~1~respect

Tha Linez Drawn 06-26-03 09:53 AM

progression is important...and stagnation is not an option...nice multis and vocab...I liked it until you got to J-lo...looks like you've been contemplating some deep topics lately...keep it movin dunny...check my new joint--Ya'll Hate it...peace


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