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wanna be tha best,
iight im not a whack emcee but im not tha best, i wanna be tha best tho, and my shit aint cutting it, could anybody help me elevate so i can get closer or mabey even reach my goal?
imma post some links up just tell me what i need to work on, to unleash my true potential |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60783
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60204 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=59636 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60024 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55954 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55954 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55648 check them out an tell me what i need to work on, constructive criticizim is needed. |
uppin this waitin on some help,
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come on i need to know,
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Re: wanna be tha best,
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read each one of these,,,,I promise you that your next battle will be much better....and then when you look back....you won't be able to stand your battles.If You Want To Learn How To Battle.....Click This Link And Read The problem with your verses is your punches for the most part.You need to start to use personals and wordplay.And work on multies....If you want to see some illmatic battles...pm me ...everybody here is lacking in text....If you click tha link and read everything and master it,you could easily merk the text cats here.... |
iight thanx
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yea tell me if they worked fo u dawg
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they helped me
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i didnt see 2 much wrong with ur 1st battle u put up their i liked it maself
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