Panama - Stuck on a Bitch (Freestyle)
 

From the first time i met u,I knew that u was speaical
Lips was Sexual,
but my pimp game,
had no effect on you
brothers had stepd on,
moms just slept on you
matter a fact didnt think,
i couldve of have slept with u
a perfect dime pieace,
remind me of times we
hot mommy, with a body all up on me
we sipped armi ,
lam-ped up in shade
so much affection,
it was almost clache
the kind of loven we made
yo was my Down-Ass wit a Round-Ass
get a pound of that best grass,
hopped in the S-Class, Mommy u da best at
givin head that
make my toes curls

This Was Only Ok..Vocab Wasn't All Too Good Nor Was The Flow..You Changed The Rhyme Scheme Numerous Times...My Tips To You...Use More Complexity And Elevate..

^^all that need to be said^^

with those length of bars you'd eithe rneed to rap really fast or really slow....so extended them a bit!

Hey Guys thanks for the advice it means alot

Lips was Sexual,
but my pimp game,

^^^Lmao , Man u need elevate dawg , Ur rhymes are simple , U need too up ur Vocab.... Are u a male or Female