spitten
 

spitten bout the street straight off dame......this aint no game
sayin shit hotter than fifty still aint got my fame
i spit flames from the mouth....soundin like i was from down south
i aint ludacris but you can tell this word of mouth
rhyming bout everything nothing will get pass.....even bout the mean teacher in math class
jokin on the nigga talkin bout when the crew super glued the seat to his ass
yall say my words are not complex enough to be on this site....nigga i don't give a damn heres my ass take a bite
niggas talkin shit about me jackin there dick on the comp. lookin darker than night
I'm a little monster when i rap niggas say i'm very scary
family don't know me well they say i'm very mary
i like them so i don't show them how i can be
mom say she understand but i say just cause you cared me for 9 months don't mean now you know me
i aint grown i aint you i'm somewhere in between
they call rippa for a reason even aunt suga say i'm mean

now i want mad reply ya heard
it's not long so get yo lazy asses up give some crit.

it was ok...you need to add some complexity and some better vocab namsayin....keep elevatin dunny...wahid


return the favor and read my post N.E.W.S.

Yo dawg twoz kinda tite, needz mor word skill, try battlin tha illest lyricist in tha UK, me, js 4 jokes. c'mon

thanks for the crit yall Don1 let finish the 2 battles i'm iin right now then i'll pm you bout all right.