Our Wings
 

"Our Wings"

On potent wings we fly to places others can only marginally comprehend
Places that exist in the far reaches of fantasy
Yet rest on the edges of illusions, lived out in dreams not quite complete

This world of unreality calls for us but knows no names
Instead reads our minds and intertwines the unconcious thoughts
We think about without realizing the boundaries we've crossed

For us, this escape on potent wings needs no explanantion
it is not a prerequisite for something more
It only needs to be what we desire because it's ours......yours and mine

eh man..i can't say one real comment cause you know what im gonna say - this was real raw

self explanitory

holla

This piece is simple as it is...

although it has well used vocabs..it seemed a little bit weak on the imagery part...

but the very simplistic theme of the poem made the piece really nice to read...

"It inly needs to be what we desire because it's ours......yours and mine"

^^^ i really think the ending is my best part...like most poems i read...

nicely done!