eng-bonics (big l rip-off)
 

a mate is your friend, if its written its penned, okay?/
if you had sex, you shagged someone or you got your end away/
running game on a girl means you chatting her up/
also called getting into her, instigating's a stir up/
a successful lie is a blag, a long toke is a drag/
if a girl shags a lot of men that makes her a slag/
if a guy is minted, that means he loves to flash bucks/
and if you got buggered that means you got your ass fucked/
sound, sorted and wicked all mean cool/
a man who's a fuckwit or fucktard is a fool/
a bloke is a man, a close one is your la/
if the topic is closed, you got kicked out, you're barred/
hammered, battered or wasted just mean drunk/
chonged or mashed means stoned, a scally's a young punk/
cocaine is charlie, an x-pill is an e/
grass, hash, dope and smoke all mean weed/
a mate moving on your ex without permission is sharkin'/
making and smoking a joint up is skinning and sparkin'/
i know you love the way i'm freaking it/
i talk with slang and ima never stop speaking it/

i figured this would be a cool idea for a re-vamp piece. yes this is a modeified version of big l's ebonics and the last 2 lines were lifted off the song. just paying the man some respect is all.

feedback?

Never Been That Big A Fan Of Rip-Offs Or Remixes!

But, This Wasn't Took Bad, It Flowed Well, Had Complexity, Vocab Was aight...

Overall: 7.9/10

Pretty good dawg,i'll need to do a Scottish one also.

Peace

Word, Not A Big Fan Of Remixes Or Rip Off'z...
But Fairly Well Written..

It Woulda Been Dope If it Wasn't For Big L's Version Bein' Way better Than Urs.....

^^thats becuase hes the greatest underground emcee ever, you fucktard.

lets me get this str8, you think it "wouldve been dope" if big l's version wasnt way better? what the fuck has the standard of big l's piece have to do with mine? its either dope or its not.
the only lines i took were the last two, i only really took the concept, quit comparing it to original for fucks sake.