[ Zenith ]
 

The Apex...aka...Zenith Of Depth...
Sentences Bless...Text...Till No Sin In It's Left...
The Mere...Sense Of A Breath...Purifies Thoughts...
Versed...Reverse Osmosis...Cleanses Your Heart...
Clenching Your Chest...Darkness Illuminates The Way Of The Blind...
Holding A Cane...To Walk The Narrow...Straight Of A Life...
The Innocence Of Babies That Die...Become Slaves In The Mind...
In Reincarnation...A Sheep...Exchanges Place With A Lion...
Saving Face Within Lies...On The Plate...Knowledge Ate With A Knife...
Wrists Cry...Red Tears Of Pain...Puddles Of Joy...
Fate's Sick Sense Of Humor...20 Years Of Waste...The Son Of A Boy...
Wilts In The Hands Of A Gun...Only Birth Given Is Death...
A Curse...Stamped On The Tongue...
The Shackles Of Fear Broken...Sitting Back As The Years Floating...
The Sound Of Bars Closing...Triggers...His Ears Open...
Screams...Of His pPeers Opus...Played In The Key...Of A Car...
To Conformity...We Steer Over...Leaving Our Mark...Like Rear Wheel Doughnuts...
Columbs Crumble...Gears Smoking...Prophets Mumble...
Metacarples...Tunnel...Thoughts...To Sea...The Light...
The Free Of Might...Right...Sips The Passion Fruit...Given By The Tree Of Life...
The Ability To Write...On Clouds...And Staple Them...3...To The Sky...

I'm Out For The Weekend But I Jus Wanted To Post This Before I Left..

Tight Drop Fam!

It Flowed Well, The Way You Structured It Was Capital, Complexity Was There Too....

Overall:8.7/10, Keep Droppin Them!

Complex Peice Dawg, I Liked it

Uppin This Ish...

Fuck Man...Stop Sleepin On Me

Uppin...

^^^

Ya'll Niggaz Sleepin On Me Like King Size Beds...

For The 6th Time..Uppin!!

Salam Alaikum...i have no idea why people are sleepin on this like sheets and pillow cases...this drop was some ill shit like negative stool sample results...it was complex (which is the best thing about it)...nice vocab and the sentence (bar) structure was on point...nice drop Que....wahid

Alaikum Salam My Brotha...Thx For The Feedback

a lot of filler in here.
it was complex indeed
but i didn't see a thought
out meaning. that grabbed
my attention. but i respect it
for what it is, and deliver you
the props that you deserve. i
don't like the way you typed
it at all though. only real
advice would be to
change that.
otherwise
nice
pz!

This was a cool piece i liked what you put out there it was dope..

Keep it coming mang 1..

Return the favor..
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Thx Fa The Feedback..