( Fabrication ) The Search For Truth , Too Deep For Yall!
 

Fabrication is every where we go / Everything we see /
It replaces our thoughts on everything we wanna be /
We're taught to believe without seeing /
But now wut I see I can't believe /
Got fat models lookin skinny in pullouts /
Air brushin blemishes , and we still doubt /
Do we look good enough ? / No we want perfect /
This is when Fabrication leaves it purpose /
Fabricating lies , Fabricating spies /
Fabricating everything we see between both eyes /
I turn on TV what do I see / Reality aint real no more , everything is 3d /
Computerized , Through the lies / I see that everybody aint real no more /
Aint true inside / 1 way of thinking / a Mono thought process /
We all think alike , and still we don't stop it /
One day , We'll all be thinkin evil / No-one will speak out /
And when people finally speak , we will freak out /
Learn lessons , Read books , Find the truth out on your own /
And slowly you'll see your chair become a king's throne /
But be careful / Wise men become Wicked once introduced to Power /
So would u rather live powerful and wicked , or wise as a coward?/

whats with all the / , /? they indicating new lines or what, cos you had like 2 or 3 in each line!

Could You Some Tweaking Here And There, Not That Bad For A Newbie, Could Up The Vocab And Rhyming,

Keep It Up!

Thanks .. But I wasn't really trying 2 emphasize on vocab or rhyming . That writing's main emphasis was on the meaning , and if you read through the meaning it turns out to be a very good meaning . Moral of the writing , Be yourself and always remember never to fall in the trap of thinking like everybody else . That's a big meaning to me cuz people fall into those traps everyday , doing drugs , gettin into gangs , all that shit .

Nice drop. All the / kinda made it hard to go with for me here and there but it was good. Yea the meaning to it was good, voacb and all needs work but since you say you were not worried about then i guess its all good ya know?

Peep My latest drop: Dear God.

That Was Actually Good For a Drop From a New RB Member...
It Could Have Been Worded Better, Yes... But He Got His Point
Accross To Me... So His Job Was Done...