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eye_deneddy 06-27-03 07:54 PM

"LiFe"...lots a multies, left side rhymes and right side rymes
 
...In this life...its strickly survival-of-the-fittest//
When you die...your rival-is-the-witness//
Caught by ur wife..arriven-wit-your-mistress//
It is trife..continue on livin-in-this-buisness//
Roll the dice...loosen and givin-in-ta-bitches//
We are so blind...only wishen-for-the-riches//
Its all hype...lost our souls-and-now-we-miss-it//
Its all right?...no,we're scorched-wit-more-blisters//
We've lost our pride...givin whores-our-sweet-kisses//
Jesus christ...u cant be more-in-the-distance//
Heal our sights...only wars-in-our-visions//
Make us realize...that we cause sores-and-incisions//
Make us see-why...we're making poor-lame-decisions//
Please dont hide...come out and show-us-ur-reasons//
Be our guide...dont go-when-we're-pleedin//
Be our minds...soak up the blood-when-were-bleeden//
Give me a sign...a kiss or a hug-in-the-evenin//
Till its time...dont shrug-and-start-leaven//
One of a kind...wasnt that us-in-the-beginin//
Now we dien...our spirits are hushed-and-just-freezen//
No point in tryin...were crushed-in-ta-smitherines-and//
No denien...it starts today,our present-and-history's-end//
Dont start cryin...our hopes and blessins-have-exceeded//
Always violence...doin drugs, even peasants-are-weeded//
Close our eye-lids...while these confessions-are-repeated//
And this life-is...messed,-and-my-hearts-beaten//
And you ask why...its from this life and its harsh-beatins...

eye_deneddy 06-28-03 12:49 PM

someones gotta like this piece, i put alotta inta this, check the flow and the multies...i dont get it,why dont anyonepost on this...im uppin still


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