Raz Vs Audo
 

Rules:
No dickrydin ....ect Votes
12 lines min and max...
Post Asap

audo

yo i'll take my [steal toe], and my [elbow] to show u whats up//
i'll bore u a [new asshole] save ya [soul] kuz nigga ya lost ya luck//

u [beatin me] is like [muhammed ali] tryin ta sit still, it ain't gonna happen//
pickin me to battle u must be blind, but this ain't brail, this is close caption//

i got u a new chinese name 'Master' 'Bation', kuz u tha only one feelin yo shit//
girls told me about u, u won't post ur shit kuz u afraid to commit//

dawg ur job gonna be hard, how can u diss me I have no flaws//
and if i was u i wouldn't brag bout where u live and ya connection, "dsl" in bathroom stallz// *dsl = dick suckin lips

okay call me an 'asshole', it's fine i 'spit' 'ill' 'shit' and i can 'back' it//
i'mma 'wipe' 'u out' and make u not come back is my rap tactic//

u a 'cracka' fuck i'mma call u 'snack' 'well' kuz u snack on a lyracists rhyme//
if we was ina club battlin, u'd try and battle, but u'd look like a mime// (nuffin to say)

*throws Audo tha mic*
Yo turn...

aight

listen dog, in the closet is the colt and tha tec/
ima bust my guns, pierce bullets through ya neck/
only way you spit some ill shit, is when it leaks out ya pussy lips/
I rip this shit, rip you up, this is my win, you a bunch of drips/
and you thought my job was gonna be hard?/
I got all the disses here, I'm just playing my cards/
and you try and act non-chalant in front of my entourage/
but nigga, my sudden barrage will make ya face look like a collage/
Your girl gave me a name, its the side tapper/
she wants me more cause Audo's the better rapper/
and your girl, I got a pet name, Ms. Feely/
cause she's feeling my shit, both of 'um fa sheezy/

done

good luck

TIME 2 VOTE

lol nice way to feed off my shit .......lol luv tha creativity......but newayz good battle for tha most part............ UPPIN FOR VOTESSSSS

nice battle Raz, you had some nice punchlines. holla back!
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thanx dawg, damn nigga would hafta kill ta get a vote round here...lol oh well UPPIN...........................

yup, I got alotta battles people still gotta vote on. yo check your PM inbox aight. holla!
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eh yo Raz, check out my battle against VIP911, aight
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I'ma have to go with Raz, he had a better lay-out, he had better wordplay, and multis....Audo took the punchlines though, both did ok......keep elevating

Vote-Raz

eh yo EvilKronix, can you vote on this 2 battles?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61264

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61197

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Audo you dont seem to grap it yet....fuck that Gangsta shit it doesnt work in battles....my vote goes to Raz cause at least he had punches....Raz you are a decent newb but Audo....read some more battles and try again.

aight uppin this shit...................vote vote vote
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