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CrazyE 06-28-03 04:15 PM

Raised in the Ghetto .....
 
I got a rocket in my pocket , but no time to shoot it
I got a market on target , but no time to loot it
I got appointments , I got ointments ....
I got a pack with six tightly rolled joints in it ....
Tickets to a show / gonna have to blow - off
Cool it on the phone , can't hear you with the dope cough - Man
Turn down the volume , cause I don't understand ....
You loud shit , fucked up , pissed off bit
It ain't cool , and Crazy ain't a fool

I was raised in the ghetto , down the street from the whinos
second story of my projects - Lived some Fine Hoes
By the time I was ten, I had plenty of foes ..
Kids who want to rob you clean ....
In the streets where I lived, it got really mean
I was kicked out of Highschool because I was too Cool -to read
Instead I learned to hustle and shoot and Uzi
I learned numbers and murder , homicide is just a word that Use
Drugs ? Thats some shit I tend to abuse ...

In the ghetto , it gets hairy ... bullets whiz by your head
The uneasy get scary ......... But I'm Calm
My Dad was in the war , he dropped napalm
I guess I been bred to kill .......
Doing drugs is just time to kill ... Doing drugs is just time to kill
In the Ghetto , life is the epitemy of hardcore
Its hard living the good life , when your fighting in a gang war
Best friends last about a week , when you see the bullet hit
Its enough to make you freak - out / to make you shout
Let me out of here ,......... living in the ghetto
Is like living in constant fear - overwhelming fright
If you want to buy a pack of smokes wait until daylight
Or your Crazy , we got needles and broken bottles
I ain't seen no fucking daisies

The Ghetto its full of drivebys and death thrills
Doing drugs is just time to kill
Doing drugs is just time to kill .....(Fade out)

Crazy E

RythmicTendicies 06-29-03 07:23 AM

This wasn;t all that good dawg!

Were you really raised in the ghetto or are you just trying to follow in someones footsteps..eh? It flowed not all the bad, your rhyming capabilities are restricted, try to sue more elaborate vocab!

Keep elevatin..

WOOSHY 06-29-03 08:58 AM

id like to say this is a good rhyme it has good context but u need to expand ur vocab, apart from that niec drop, jus keep doing ya thing


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