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13th Disciple 06-29-03 12:43 AM

Camarac vs 13th Disciple
 
okay...herez the rulez: 15-20max....only mods/admins vote.......
cam u droppin first and i'll follow soon as u post.....no feeding...
d/r...blah blah blah....and especially no hate votes........i retired
but i gotta put ur mouth to rest......check in nigga

Caramac 06-29-03 12:45 AM

Yup.

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C-Section 06-29-03 12:49 AM

can wannabe mods that pretend to close threads vote? plus the end likes to tease me about making me a mod, that has to mean something....

its like you cant spell the west without the ES........even if i cant vote ill still leave my opinon......but id rather vote.

Caramac 06-29-03 12:52 AM

your girl and talk got something in common: Their both cheap
D’s Behind my Bars, & only thing Breaking Out is his Acne.
actually, i dont need a Nintendo to change Cartridges, geek
cause yo - that brown line in your briefs. . isnt a win Streak!
you've been beat, i'll make a necklace outta ya heart of Gold
then you'll get Thrown thru the Air for claiming ya the Heir to my Throne.
Kid aint grown, I can sum how many girls you've fucked:
you thought a Camels Toe was on the end of its foot!
now ya stuck, cuz but im iller than you, quit crying and pleeding
beating you? im good at Arcades, - only a Quarter efforts needed!
ur hairs receeding, been doin this text shit too long, but screw ya,
i'll fuck you up in so many ways, End'll rename me Karma Sutra!
You came nice against phrantik, and hey - i wont front
i look at you in a new light. . but ur still one ugly cunt!
this dumb fuck needs to quit rap, or catch a hard backhand
cuz his fat ass Swallows Balls then Gets Ghost, like Pac Man!
fuck gats and, knives, Cams taking lives without a gun,
i'll bitchslap you with ur girl, and hit two pussies at once!
this wussy's done, how you gon' act ganksta? ya dead soft
so try taking me Head On. . and i'll take ya fucking Head Off!

Nucca!


Edited For C-Section - Sure, You Can Vote Mate. .

13th Disciple 06-29-03 01:02 AM

U Bout To Be Removed Of Ur Flesh Watch As I Burn This Faggot
To Death/Police Find My English Book As Evidence.....Realized U
Got Killed Wit My Text/Lyrics Cause U To Bleed......Cut Off Ur
Whole Existance Wit Ease/Ur Shit Couldn't Be Dope......If Ur Diet
Only Consisted Of Weed/Unloadin Verbal Lead At This Kid.......Yes
Disciple Reppin The South/Label U As Mr. Bucket.......Cuz U Stay
Havin Ballz In Ur Mouth/Leave U Seekin A Gun.......Watchin Me
Unleash Numerous Shots/Force U To Call Me Maxwell House....Cuz
I'm Good To The Last Drop/Halfway Thru This Battle And I'm
Already Leavin U Sonned/Bite Ur Tongue.......Cuz If I Wanted Ur
Two Cents I Would've Stolen Ur Income/How Can I Learn And
Elevate?.....When This Battles Not Even A Test/Cuz The Only Time
U Pushin Weight Is When Ur Rearrangin Ur Bench Press/Expressin
My Sincerities Cuz I'm Leavin U Dearly Departed Kid/Deposit My
Fist In Ur Chest And Withdraw My Hand Wit Ur Heart In It/U
Already Sweatin And Shakin.........Hidin Behind Ur Curtains And
Blinds/Camarac Couldn't Be Flippin The Script If This Actor Was
Rehearsin His Lines!!!

Beyyyyyaaaaaaatttcccchhhh!!!!!

C-Section 06-29-03 01:07 AM

if desciple agrees i could vote i will vote,............................................. .................................................. .............................................BTW this was a dope battle by both of you

13th Disciple 06-29-03 01:09 AM

vote dawg..........................................do what u gotta do...........
......................just come honestly.....thats all i ask for...............1

Caramac 06-29-03 01:13 AM

Me and Desciple Dont Actually Have Any Beef By The Way, We Spoke Over Aim And Were Cool, Just Wanted To Settle This, Lol. .

13th Disciple 06-29-03 01:15 AM

Tru Dat.....Ain't No Beef At All............................................... .........
,,,,...................Its Only The Fuckin Net........................................

C-Section 06-29-03 01:28 AM

ok. you both came nice

these lines stood out the most

your girl and talk got something in common: Their both cheap
^nice opener, i heard it a few times but you fliped it nice

D’s Behind my Bars, & only thing Breaking Out is his Acne.
^ok line, it would be better if he actually has acne(i dont know)

cause yo - that brown line in your briefs. . isnt a win Streak!
^LOL its true, desciple is full of shit...

ur hairs receeding, been doin this text shit too long, but screw ya,
i'll fuck you up in so many ways, End'll rename me Karma Sutra!
^LOL nice

this dumb fuck needs to quit rap, or catch a hard backhand
cuz his fat ass Swallows Balls then Gets Ghost, like Pac Man!
^LMAO sometimes the simplest shit makes makes good punches

i'll bitchslap you with ur girl, and hit two pussies at once!
^nicely fliped

desciples

Police Find My English Book As Evidence.....Realized U
Got Killed Wit My Text/
^nice line, for some reason it seemed canibusish, not saying you bit thats just his style, dope line

Ur Shit Couldn't Be Dope......If Ur Diet
Only Consisted Of Weed/
^nicely fliped line

Label U As Mr. Bucket.......Cuz U Stay
Havin Ballz In Ur Mouth/
^LOL mr bucket is dope, nice line

Force U To Call Me Maxwell House....Cuz
I'm Good To The Last Drop/
^nice

Halfway Thru This Battle And I'm
Already Leavin U Sonned/Bite Ur Tongue.......Cuz If I Wanted Ur
Two Cents I Would've Stolen Ur Income/
^ha LMAO, very nice.

Deposit My
Fist In Ur Chest And Withdraw My Hand Wit Ur Heart In It/
^LOL thats a dope line, another canibusish line.

over all i think desciple won it, he had better punches that hit harder IMO, and he had less fillers and a good flow none of you really had any personal lines.....

vote= 13th

13th Disciple 06-29-03 01:33 AM

i like that........despite beef or what not....still come real in a battle.....even if u would've voted for cam.....the way u broke it down...got respect for........1

Play On Wordz 06-29-03 04:25 AM

Camarac:


Quote:
your girl and talk got something in common: Their both cheap
D’s Behind my Bars, & only thing Breaking Out is his Acne.


2 Pretty Good Opener.

Quote:
actually, i dont need a Nintendo to change Cartridges, geek
cause yo - that brown line in your briefs. . isnt a win Streak!


2 Not bad line..

Quote:
you've been beat, i'll make a necklace outta ya heart of Gold
then you'll get Thrown thru the Air for claiming ya the Heir to my Throne.


2 eh, wordplay was nicely put... not bad.

Quote:
Kid aint grown, I can sum how many girls you've fucked:
you thought a Camels Toe was on the end of its foot!


HaHa, 2.5 Had me laugh ..

Quote:
now ya stuck, cuz but im iller than you, quit crying and pleeding
beating you? im good at Arcades, - only a Quarter efforts needed!


3.5 Nice...Liked It.

Quote:
ur hairs receeding, been doin this text shit too long, but screw ya,
i'll fuck you up in so many ways, End'll rename me Karma Sutra!


3 I Liked That Line A Lot.. Dont Ask Why.

Quote:
You came nice against phrantik, and hey - i wont front
i look at you in a new light. . but ur still one ugly cunt!


2 it wasnt bad..

Quote:
this dumb fuck needs to quit rap, or catch a hard backhand
cuz his fat ass Swallows Balls then Gets Ghost, like Pac Man!


4 Ha Ha Had To Be One Of The Best Lines Of this Battle!

Quote:
fuck gats and, knives, Cams taking lives without a gun,
i'll bitchslap you with ur girl, and hit two pussies at once!


2.5 It Was Pretty Good..

Quote:
this wussy's done, how you gon' act ganksta? ya dead soft
so try taking me Head On. . and i'll take ya fucking Head Off!


Not A Bad Closer... Give It A 2


CAMARAC POINT RATING:23.5

13th Deciple:

Quote:
U Bout To Be Removed Of Ur Flesh Watch As I Burn This Faggot
To Death/Police Find My English Book As Evidence.....Realized U
Got Killed Wit My Text/


1.5 Wasn't A good way to open it really, kind of played also.

Quote:
Lyrics Cause U To Bleed......Cut Off Ur
Whole Existance Wit Ease/Ur Shit Couldn't Be Dope......If Ur Diet
Only Consisted Of Weed/


1 VERY Played, Very.. Takes Off Mad Points..

Quote:
Unloadin Verbal Lead At This Kid.......Yes
Disciple Reppin The South/Label U As Mr. Bucket.......Cuz U Stay
Havin Ballz In Ur Mouth/


1 Didn't make a lot of sense, sorry wasn't feeling it.

Quote:
Leave U Seekin A Gun.......Watchin Me
Unleash Numerous Shots/Force U To Call Me Maxwell House....Cuz
I'm Good To The Last Drop/


2.5 One of your best lines..

Quote:
Halfway Thru This Battle And I'm
Already Leavin U Sonned/Bite Ur Tongue.......Cuz If I Wanted Ur
Two Cents I Would've Stolen Ur Income


Would have been nice, if wasn't played 2

Quote:
How Can I Learn And
Elevate?.....When This Battles Not Even A Test/Cuz The Only Time
U Pushin Weight Is When Ur Rearrangin Ur Bench Press


Another played line man, work on that..
1.5

Quote:
Expressin
My Sincerities Cuz I'm Leavin U Dearly Departed Kid/Deposit My
Fist In Ur Chest And Withdraw My Hand Wit Ur Heart In It


not bad.. would of been better in an audio but not text.

2

Quote:
U
Already Sweatin And Shakin.........Hidin Behind Ur Curtains And
Blinds/Camarac Couldn't Be Flippin The Script If This Actor Was
Rehearsin His Lines!!!


2 eh wasnt bad

13TH DECIPLES POINT SCORE: 14.5

voteCAMARAC

Camarac - Overall nice verse, your punch lines over came his, flow stayed steady, some real creative lines.. pretty good verse.

13th Deciple - Eh, your verse wasnt bad, could be A LOT!! Better, punches were pretty played, lacked creativity, flow was pretty good.. but you lost this man..


[I Am Not A Mod...But I can Vote Better Then 80% of the Mods Here, Trust Me... Plus I'm Getting A mod Spot Of This Forum Soon Anyway]

pz....zp

Caramac 06-29-03 08:57 AM

1-1

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G. Buttersworth 06-29-03 10:43 AM

Cam's verse.

your girl and talk got something in common: Their both cheap
D’s Behind my Bars, & only thing Breaking Out is his Acne.

^wasn't really feeling this opener.

actually, i dont need a Nintendo to change Cartridges, geek
cause yo - that brown line in your briefs. . isnt a win Streak!

^pretty ight.. i liked it.


now ya stuck, cuz but im iller than you, quit crying and pleeding
beating you? im good at Arcades, - only a Quarter efforts need

dope line... nice creativity and word-play... if you think about it.

this dumb fuck needs to quit rap, or catch a hard backhand
cuz his fat ass Swallows Balls then Gets Ghost, like Pac Man!

^ ball lines are kinda played... but it's funny the way you used it.
2 points.lol.


this wussy's done, how you gon' act ganksta? ya dead soft
so try taking me Head On. . and i'll take ya fucking Head Off!

^ ight finisher.

13th's verse

U Bout To Be Removed Of Ur Flesh Watch As I Burn This Faggot
To Death/Police Find My English Book As Evidence.....Realized U
Got Killed Wit My Text/

ight opener.. couldn't been better in many ways.

Lyrics Cause U To Bleed......Cut Off Ur
Whole Existance Wit Ease/Ur Shit Couldn't Be Dope......If Ur Diet
Only Consisted Of Weed

^eh... it's a eye opener but nothing special.

Unloadin Verbal Lead At This Kid.......Yes
Disciple Reppin The South/Label U As Mr. Bucket.......Cuz U Stay
Havin Ballz In Ur Mouth/

eh... another "Balls" line... it was ight tho..

Leave U Seekin A Gun.......Watchin Me
Unleash Numerous Shots/Force U To Call Me Maxwell House....Cuz
I'm Good To The Last Drop

pretty dope.

Halfway Thru This Battle And I'm
Already Leavin U Sonned/Bite Ur Tongue.......Cuz If I Wanted Ur
Two Cents I Would've Stolen Ur Income

i liked it. nice.

U
Already Sweatin And Shakin.........Hidin Behind Ur Curtains And
Blinds/Camarac Couldn't Be Flippin The Script If This Actor Was
Rehearsin His Lines!!!

nice word-play..ight finisher.

I felt that 13th took this by a hair.. both of ya'll were equally matched.

cam's verse really didn't move me as much as 13th did, but it was a dope battle.. good shit from both.
vote= 13th

fgee 06-29-03 05:24 PM

newbies?^
wtf u on about?
it's fukin weak using the same lines...


heres the shit he did against me in battle on H2Flow

You came nicer than i expected, and hey - i wont front
i look at you in a new light. . but ur still one ugly cunt!
name biter. . taking hits, sucking tits of chicks with dicks
fgee's Down Right Square like Playstation tips and tricks!
this hating bitch needs to quit rap, & get a hard backhand
cuz his fat ass Swallows Balls then Gets Ghost, like Pac Man!
fuck gats and knives, Cams taking lives without a gun,
i'll bitchslap you with ur girl, and hit two pussies at once!
this wussy's done, how you gon' act ganksta? ya dead soft
so try taking me Head On. . and i'll take ya fucking Head Off!

^good to see u have originality down to a T



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