Bribeone1 (1-0) vs. understatement (1-1)
 

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Topic...
devils advocate

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7:00 AM 12-30-08

Court In Session

We Bring forth U....Commiter of Human Genocide, Nuclear Warfare,Greed....and so many more............................

What do u Plead?...............nOT Guilty...**SmirK**

And who r U?.... speaking on his behalf?......His AdVocatE.............

If U cant Handle This .........Take My Words and Edit Them.....
Advocate Witt no Catholic Ettiquette ,Never Considerate:....
For Life To Me aint nothing Happy but Murder and Greed:....
I Needed Help, so I came to him and he said "tell me what u Need":..
Enemies Hearts Bleed?...Tell Me what U want or wish for::....
Ill Forever be in Debt to him.......so hes the one i speak for:....

With that said let me speak on his Behalf

Hate quenches His thrist...So This World is just refreshin:..
Greed Fills his Hunger......Thats Mankinds First Invention:...
Detention Camps Of Genocide raised By a Man Completly Demented:..
The People chose his Crown Then Blame Him Like If He Meant It:......
Humanity knows the puddles It runs Through and blame me when wet:..
Sorry But all I do Is Put some of my thoughts in This screwballs' Head:...
Evil a Threat?.....I think Mirrors could tell u better The Instigator:..
That means u yourselfs ...humans..the New force Of evil Innovators:..

So What do have to say about War

Wars' Brought Forth By A Few Mens Idea Of Good Ideals:..
Blame Freedom as The reason...HaH!..Up go Oil Bills:..
Thrill For The Game Seeks Out The Prey In The Hunter:..
instead for the one above ...u might as well pray for down~under:..
And Then Wonder were Your God Is When U Down and Out:..
Sorta Like Feelin Like U were suddenly....Drowed In a drought:..

so like he said Not Guilty.................

I sat drinking my martini, in a cloud Lay Z boy
and the man across from me looked concerned
convincing me that he was no more than a toy
a puppet in wings, pretending to have learned

"Look Mike, he walks all over you, treat you like dirt,
he didn't like his own wardrobe, so he took your shirt,
and the world is going to disarray. He doesn't care,
the soil is going dry, trees and plants becoming bare.
And he leaves it to you! Mike, you control nothing
join me, my brother, and perhaps we'll end suffering"

"Are you out of your mind man? He knows all!
his ears are the clouds, he can hear us right now!
there's no way he ignore his impending downfall,
You have to stop before you become too proud!"

"Shut up Mike, I've gone too far to for my car to die,
argue all you want, but my attacks will continue to fly,
and down he will come, yes, as far as anyone can fall,
neglecting our lives...He should bow down to us all!
Join me Mike! We can rule! don't you want any power?
no, I know you don't I can see from how you glower
so go toell your Master what I intend to do. Go now!
before I change my mind, before my anger grows loud"

I strolled out of the room, a few minutes after Mike scurried,
some powerful man, I couldn't tell by how he left in that hurry,
He was always my advocate, trying to keep me from rashness,
but now I was in too deep, and nobody else could have this
yes, I will survive long enough to rule, and to see that far
And everyone will fall to their knees at the name "MorningStar"!
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Michael the Archangel
Lucifer
let there be votes!
Peace

I liked both very much and itsa very hard bttle to chose from here....sersiouly hard...i thought that Understatements was good.although he got me confused..i didnt kno who mike was ntill i read the bottom and i wasnt for going all voer it again....then again bribe ones was kinda short...but to the point and wordplay and imagery were eually good so all i have to go on is the actual way they twisted the plot...and i thought bribes was nicley done.....VEY close battle though...lol should be proud of yerselfs bois

VOTE=Bribe

ok nice battle, real close but my vote goes to Bribeone1 because he really got in depth with his verse, and i never eally got into understatement's drop

vote= Bribeone1

OMG, dopest battle i come across yet, both concepts we executed superbly, each person had some very good worplay, but Bribe jus took this with a slight bit of more imagenery and vocab, both of yall came really dope tho well done but

vote=bribe

Well I hate to repeat everyone but they were both really good. Its a hard decision.. you both have great talent but I dont want to boost your ego... so here's what we could improve on ... we can all extend on our vocab but not in these..... umm.. yea, metaphors better imagery... I like to feel like I'm in the story picture it like a movie being told.... I couldn't feel the movie setting in understaments too well... it was more just a story... I felt more of like I was there in Bribe's so my vote goes to Bribe

Vote. Bribe1

I completely disagree with the previous three votes. . It was interesting that both verses imployed a dialogue-type of a situation. However, understatement's writing was unbelievably orchestrated. It seemed to almost satirically dissect the numerous "good v. evil" stories that our society eats up (so much so that it reminded me of the movie Dogma). .

Bribe's verse was well-written and packed a good concept, but the complexity I got out of understatement's completely handed him my vote. My vote goes to understatement.

I can't poll vote due to a bug in RB's system. . MM, add a vote for the recipient of my written explanation.

^thanks lyric.
I actually got the name morning star from dogma lol.
great verse bribe, if I didn't say it before, it really captivated me.

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I'm Going To Have To Agree With LyricAli..
Understatement Had Great Expression..
I Just liked The Way He Came..
I Wasn't 100% Feelings Bribe's Courtroom..
But Just The Way Understatement Orchestrated It...
Wow... Vote Understatement

A Long Explanation Isn't Going To Happen
Because I Am Very Busy, But I Read This A
While Ago, And I Felt Understatement Took
It...Easily. His Story Was 10 Times Better
Even Though His Rhyme Scheme Sucked He
Got My Vote. . . . pz

You Guys Each Came With Equal Effort.
This Won't Go Unnoticed. In The Result
Of This Tie, You Both Get Wins.

Bribeone1 [2-0]
Understatement [2-1]


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