UNDERATED~OVERHATED (0-0) vs. The MRB (0-0)
 

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Topic...
eye of the tiger

k im checked in, dodgy topic, should be interesting tho............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

cheack in....eye of da tiger...nice///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////.................................................. ...........

AITE EYE OF DA TIGER...I CUDNT BASES IT ALL ON DAT..BUT SUM IS....SUM HEAT..FOR DIS ON/////MONDAY MORNIN BORED..MITE AS

^^^^^^
interesting hmmmmmmmmm
u went for a straight batteling approach which was weird, im more into the topical shit, great battle verse tho, lets see what happens on wednesday

dis is my first topical battle...so i just wrote my verse wit punches multies on sum based on eye of da tiger...just to get it flowin good.....i dont no wuts weird i run wit a differnt style...if the voters like it then they do..if they dont then they dont feel it ...then wuteva...but i think they will.....put sum heat up..make dis a good battle

^^ Your Verse Was Not a Topical... It Was A Battle Verse Dude...
Topical Verses Have A Story Behind Them.. Yours Was Just punches.. Like A Battle Verse Having To Do With 'Eye of The Tiger'.. Not A Topical...

Word^^^ Go into Closed Battles, and look at some of the battles in there. (fgee vs. Mad Man would be a good pick), and I will let you edit your verse, ok???

aite dat sounds coo....//////////////////////////////////////////////////////
//////ill have it up before thursday

I have only edited the 31st line adding in a word coz i left it out when typing it up my bad. Enjoy

Eye of the tiger

The predator, majestic, as I stroll across the mainland/
The forest of my territory is the place where I can expand/
My skills and knowledge, applied to my swampy habitat/
Yes im free from bars and cage, I don’t want to be labelled a big cat/
On a board that describes, the dangers and the whys/
Yes isn’t this the species from where all the original problems arise?/
Im not one of six billion, look at the notice, check the figure/
A.A Milne should be labelled a prophet, coz I could soon be the one and only tigger/
Im not a magic healer, leave me alone and ill be discreet/
Cook some other fancy herbs, for quacks to make ends meet/
Humans have their hands on our wheel, our futures are being controlled n driven/
We’d be either locked away or shot down, im afraid that was a given/
So remaining solitary was our last chance at being free/
If poachers happen to get lucky, they’ll only be taking me/
While my brother and sisters live on, unless they’ve already been took/
I bet some of these beasts are so hell bent, all they do is look/
And maybe they’ll get lucky there bullet, ll give chase/
Tony please throw that cereal box down and do something for your own race/
Fuck the merchandise deals and the stupid childish laughter/
Come back, defend the kind, who they painted your stripes after/
I can’t live with this threat much longer, but jail would just be giving up/
Tranquilizers or hard rounds, im still gonna hide and duck/
Coz out of them two places, not any I’d rather be/
True the mesh does provide safety, but I can’t live there you see/
I couldn’t bear little kids, their noses pressed up against the glass/
Teens flipping me the bird, when I could kick their scrawny ass/
The 2nd option does look bleaker, but I can be assured/
I’d come more expensive, than the common could afford/
My skin would be rubbed on old men, as they giggled with glee/
My teeth would be sold as jewellery, for a handsome fee/
Bones sold as treatments to no hopers, their last shot to avoid falling into the abyss/
Shit they’d probably put my eye in the Sly Stallone museum just to rip the piss//

MENTAL INSTITUTE...NICE SHIT MRB..

SOLITARY Minds of a mad mayne stuck in here since his youth/
scary images flashin thru trapped here for life in this institute/
wut shud i do,i still dont no wut got me here in da first place that one nite/
the scary part about this is i dont no wut my face looks like/
strugglin to see the lite,but i wake up an all i see is white/
walls covered by a foam,no way to escape besides eatin my way out/
so i spit till dawn,as da canibals an crazy eaters bump there head up an down/
scriptures out da holy quaran, bout a yung cat seekin for da crown/
lost it all in da quickest second,roundin out his clips till they empty/
the cost is life in a mental house,reckon for fags that attemp me/
the wrong time an place for a yung bluh to decent for peace/
but instead mas murdered 30 cats leavin em bloody deceast/
R.i.p to the ones who didnt deseve this .cuz of this beast/
trapped inside of me,prayin for a way out but nuthin can help my internal bleedin/
my closest dawgs deceived me so they were bound to get locked up in a coffin/
i wish dat was me..instead i cant breathe in this world so lost in/
born wit da eye but im still blind from the truth in disguise enlisted in the game/
sworn to ply out the skillz ,wit these freaky images enscriped in my brain/
missin my fame,cuz of one fuked up mistake costin me my life for them to take/
casted over my name is shame,discoverin the true facts of life/
switched the knife an the glock wit a pen an a pad frozen on ice/
my skillz still wont shine,as the tigers eye metamorphs into metaphores/
in this lines an walls i see my self dyin in the canibal hall/
set aside my lifes ambitions bumpin em as a ridah till its my call/

^ yo underated i jus edited the 31st line, by adding word in mine coz i missed it out, hope ya ok wid that
thankz

Well both had pretty decent wordplay I liked MRB's imagery a little better, it was a bit childish but still good. The whole institue .... well I didn't feel the institute.... so yea, my vote goes to the MRB

Vote: MRB

nice battle guys, on the real

MRB had real nice vocab and imagery and so did O~O...but MRB just had more...

vote= MRB

sand pop that in there for me will ya?

MRB dominated this for me, I really wasn't feelin the mental instituition piece.
It had some cool lines, but the actual tiger metaphor phucking owned.
lol at the Winnie The Pooh line.
vote=MRB
Peace