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A2Z (2-4) vs. Killa Kobra (0-0)
Check in's are due TUESDAY
Verses are due THURSDAY Voting End's SATURDAY You must vote on 5 battles, and drop your links in the Voting Thread Topic... watch your back |
check check....this outta be an interesting topic...im reall bored so i might even drop a verse tonight already, probley not tho
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Who'd have known that drug lords feelings are so sensitive?//
All I did was tell him that a small order of weed wasn't so imperative// His face got red and his kunckles began to turn white// I saw the danger just in time and in fright I ran into the night// Hours later there were already rumors i was dead// The lord was so engraged he put a price on my head// Ember glares burn into my spine as I weep to myself mentally// I think about my baby and my girl about how much they meant to me// Creeping down shady looking streets and side alley ways// Im watching my back making sure to avoid the gang banger gaze// I can almost feel the cross hair as they graze acorss my spine// The silk of my coffin glance my face as I come near my time// The shadow becomes my friend, but it becomes my enemy// A place to reconcile but a place where a bullet waits for me// A red hot bitch that can rip through my soul and my heart// The kind of thing that can split a scalp and give new meaning to "hair part"// Streetlights are a sign saying "stay Away" as I creep along// Every listening for that gun shot, aka the Sniper's Song// Was that movement, no, now im getting paranoid// In everything lurks my death, something else to avoid// My friends and family are nonexistent, I am fending for myself// Fuck fame and wealth...im stuck fending for me, pride up on the shelf// A jungle of pavement, dumpsters and buildings my place to hide// The only place where I can have some safety as I cry inside// I creep up the street, breathing with baited breath// There the lord was, muzzle glinting, in his eyes were my death *bang* |
im here.............................................. .................................................. ..............................................intr esting......................
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I was walkin home head in hands down the usual dark alley way
But this wasnt no ordinary time for it was a shit ending to a bad day A guy jumped on me viciously n furousioly n pulled a gun to my head I was terrified he said "Gimme ya wallett motherfucker or i'l shoot you dead" I emptied my pockets of all its content tryin not to show any fear He shot off i emotionally collapsed n started to shed a tear Why me what the fuck did I do to recieve n deserve all this shit First the haters, discriminators, this n not to mention the hypocrits Man even I cant explain how i feel with this piece of paper n a pen Wanna commit suicide why didnt he kill me there n then I'l never be the same again not after this vicious attack Now when i walk down that usual dark alleyway i always watch ma back |
ok lets get some votes...yes i did redo my verse...i just did that cuz i assumed since Killa checked in 18 hours late that it was counted as a now show, but when I saw you posted I put in my original verse, which at the time i had half done so i finished it up and posted...uppin 4 votes
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A2Z...better everything and the whole story was just better had a lot more detail (i dont know what im doin in here-just wanderin waitin for Castle00 to post- so yea i came here) aight later
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Kobra u were aight, but u obviously took no time over yo verse, A2Z's was touching and he mos defiatly touch this, i loved the last four lines well done mate, a very convincing victory
vote=A2Z |
aight first of all....that wsnt a very good topic i dont think...thers not much you can wist into that...and killa..although you ma homie...your shit was dead basic...and A2Z used some wordple and metaphors that worked well...but i liked this verse particulalry
Ember glares burn into my spine as I weep to myself mentally// I think about my baby and my girl about how much they meant to me// Creeping down shady looking streets and side alley ways// Im watching my back making sure to avoid the gang banger gaze so ma votes going to A2Z |
very good A2z i have to give this one to you i think killa kobra didnt really put much time into it.......the story was just BLAh..
A2Z i was feelin yours throught ........ Vote=A2Z |
umm I hate to be mean but this was a landslide..... A2z had more content more imagery more vocab...more of an actual story....
vote:a2z |
A2Z [3-4]
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