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B.R.E. Presents: "100 Proof"
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Not a bottle, a devil spawn, that is what i see// I see not daring to disagree for the fear of being beat// I see him not listening to the pleas and crippling with his knee// And taking a stick to my face until my nose would bleed// Laughing as I would cry and beg for mercy at his feet// I see the after affects of liquor, my living room in debris// [Sound] I lay in bed at night and listen to my mother beg// For him not to be mad that she had forgo to buy bread// He would not let it go, she should have thought ahead// "I make the money, you should do you part" he said// I Hear my mothers screams as he raised to bat above his head// And brought it down on her skull, my mom falling to the ground dead// [Taste] I taste the blood from the blows landed by my dad// Taking out his anger on me for the things he never had// Finding his happiness in liquor, always drinking to be glad// But it always went to other way and went to bed mad// The constant beating for reasons untold besides "being bad"// I taste the anger at seeing my father coming in flanel clad// [Touch] I feel the belt hit me with a crack and it bite into my skin// I feel the feel on my naked back of his flanel soaked in gin// I feel the anger of my adulterous father but accusing me of the sin// I feel the anger deep inside me start to brew within// I feel the fire he held me over scald my flesh like Satan's Twin// I feel the anger, rage and hate start to deep inside begin// Smell I smell the booze of the nights drinking wafting from his clothes// The smell of blood from the table and the belt as he reaches new lows// I smell the peroxide from my mother so the markings will never show// The cheap perfume of my mother turning tricks, living a life she never chose// The fresh cast of the doctor and he sets the new cast upon her swollen nose// I smell the blood of my father on my hands, now underground, never to be exposed// input would be nice....thanks a lot |
nice song but it sounded alot like what emimen life expriences
it was good it had a kick ass flow keep up the killa song and battles |
this was amazing A2Z
the topic is a little played out, but for all I know it was a true story. The sensory perception, which was the structure of the whole piece added a great seperation, still showing the emotions through the sub titles. My favourite one was the "I feel" section, because th consistancy made it stand out. This was a really dope, and deep piece. I'm feelin you on this one dude. Peace |
^^thanx a lot playa uppin
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Capital Shit Dawg, The Topic Was Dope! I Did Sorta Get The Impression Of Em, BUt That Went As Quickly As It Came After I REad The 'Taste' verse...
You Had Smooth Flow, Good Wordplay...Overall: A Tight Verse, 8/10! |
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a2z ima have to say this is one of the best peices i have seen so far today. I really really REALLY enjoyed reading this. Everything was GREAT on it. 10/10.......Nice shit man |
the concept was original, the wordplay was threadbare, the vocab was a little basic in places but the structive and style switching of the piece gave it a standout appeal. worth the read.
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DAMN! Good shi'! I agree that it does sound soemthin' like Eminem's life, but wow! Could ya'll check out my song plz?
It's called: "Real Life" Thx. |
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I would have to disagree with everyone,saying this sounds like Eminem. Eminem would have himself beating his own mother.Eminem dont put shit out like this...this was a good drop...one of the best I heard from B.R.E.I like the way you described it,but I would have put more detail in though,since I had a cousin who father beat his mother.You should have named it something different like the Senses of Anger,or Senses of Ligour,or something like that....Real emotional,this was truly a B.R.E. classic....
this doesn't compare to PT Got though.The cow go moo.lol |
HOTTTT SHITTTT!!!!!!! Yo man i was really feelin this piece right here. Gotta give nuff respect for writtin somethin like this very deep and emotional. Despite that the wordpplay and vocab were a bit basic i think it added that extra bit a realty to the piece.(or it could just be me) BUt all in all man that was some dope shit. PEACE
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DOPE Drop Man...This Is 1 Of The Many Dope Verses You've Dropped...Good Job Man..9.2/10
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